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Empty
In the shadowlands
Close to Emerald City
Lays the grave
Of dear love
I'm so empty; Inside
My body is just;
A hollow shell
Of who i was
Oz said he could give me a heart
He lied; I'm still empty
Broken and crying
So fucking lost
Empty and grieving
For things
I'll never recover
Close to Emerald City
Lays the grave
Of dear love
I'm so empty; Inside
My body is just;
A hollow shell
Of who i was
Oz said he could give me a heart
He lied; I'm still empty
Broken and crying
So fucking lost
Empty and grieving
For things
I'll never recover
Published 31st Oct 2010
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1st Nov 2010 6:35am
Yeah it's a sad thing to lose a heart. I've spent pletny of time bitter and otherwise numb as a stone myself. But a little grief can be a sign of life.
1st Nov 2010 4:42pm
True.Lately i've just lost myself, and i'm trying and working hard to find the person i used to be. Maybe someday i'll find him, but i doubt i'll ever be the same.My heart is lost, and í'm to.
20th Nov 2014 5:55am
Should've asked Oz for a restart. Instead being given a heart is like a roadmap that's half complete and you gotta fill in the blanks yourself. Good write Gothic Madonna.
