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Love is in the Touch
Sex
Lips pressing lightly
Tongues searching soulfully, hands toying with silk strands
of hair
Lips pressing harder
Soft caresses against the smooth skin of bodies
LOVE
Is in the touch…
That each feels
From the other
Hands cupping the soft suppleness of breasts
Stroking the limpness of nipple until it becomes hard and
wanting
Kisses in strange but sensual places
With pink tongues fluttering
In open spaces
Lips opening softly
In quiet moans
Gasps escaping from deep within the throat
Scraping caresses against the hot skin of bodies
Lips pressing lighter
Tongues movement is languid
Lips brushing softly
Hands stroking slowly
Love is in the touch
Woman to woman.
Published 31st Oct 2010
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1st Nov 2010 00:26am
Hi
Good topic, and good hook. A few lines that didn't quite work though, for me, like "Tongues searching soulfully"...not sure how tongues do that?
A few cliche line as well...hands toying etc.
I reckon it's a good poem, that could be very good...keep up the polishing!
:-)
Good topic, and good hook. A few lines that didn't quite work though, for me, like "Tongues searching soulfully"...not sure how tongues do that?
A few cliche line as well...hands toying etc.
I reckon it's a good poem, that could be very good...keep up the polishing!
:-)
