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There's a name for this...
So tranquil
and inviting these scenes
of sleeping ocean waves
calmly lapping at earth’s pore
as a calculating beam of light
silhouettes intimate moments
of two souls cupped…
together, in blissful embrace
while the mysticism of blue skies smiles
it’s cottony cheeks blush rapturously
as if in the harmony of a soft melody
being coaxed by the beckoning
of a wistful wind...
across the face of diamond white sands
kissing, the ‘set in' stones aided,
by the warmth of aqua-green
clear crystal water’s soothing,
and tender touch...
on a beach,
somewhere,
as ordained
by someone,
whom
somehow
named it
PARADISE…
and inviting these scenes
of sleeping ocean waves
calmly lapping at earth’s pore
as a calculating beam of light
silhouettes intimate moments
of two souls cupped…
together, in blissful embrace
while the mysticism of blue skies smiles
it’s cottony cheeks blush rapturously
as if in the harmony of a soft melody
being coaxed by the beckoning
of a wistful wind...
across the face of diamond white sands
kissing, the ‘set in' stones aided,
by the warmth of aqua-green
clear crystal water’s soothing,
and tender touch...
on a beach,
somewhere,
as ordained
by someone,
whom
somehow
named it
PARADISE…
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Re: There's a name for this...
21st May 2013 2:45pm
oh, I am so there with this poem
cottony cheeks blush rapturously love this description... beautiful...:)
cottony cheeks blush rapturously love this description... beautiful...:)
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re: Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 5:48am
Well, can you bring the liquor? I forgot it on my way out here! thanks! lol appreciate u much :)
Re: There's a name for this...
21st May 2013 3:30pm
re: Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 5:49am
Aaaawwww how sweet of u! Ok, come on down! lol
Thank u for ur time n comment :)
Thank u for ur time n comment :)
Re: There's a name for this...
21st May 2013 3:53pm
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22nd May 2013 5:50am
Re: There's a name for this...
Anonymous
21st May 2013 4:44pm
Beautiful flow, expression & vivid imagery, Poetikmind. Enjoyed! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 5:51am
Re: There's a name for this...
Anonymous
21st May 2013 7:09pm
Sensuously beautiful and inviting, love. I am there...
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re: Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 5:54am
Cum cum then! Hurry I wanna play footsies! n I need some food too, so bring the steaks! lol thank ya babydoll :)
Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 2:00am
If we were all to go there, we'd ruin it... best to keep it paradise lost... nice write Poetikmind.....
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re: Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 5:55am
Of course ur right, but hey it'll be one helluva party UNTIL
it all does go to hell lol thanks dude !
it all does go to hell lol thanks dude !
Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 7:23am
Damn, you're gifted!!! I'm always trying to get inside your head and see what gets your juices flowing when you're in Ink mode!
But that's a mission impossible because I will never know!:)
But that's a mission impossible because I will never know!:)
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re: Re: There's a name for this...
22nd May 2013 11:27am
Wow, I'm beyond flattered! Honestly I guess it's good that
I can't see u in perso. Becuz I'd probably look to u like a blazing idiot, smiling all goofy n shit lol you simply make me giddy... Thank u my dear sweetheart, deeply appreciate you!
I can't see u in perso. Becuz I'd probably look to u like a blazing idiot, smiling all goofy n shit lol you simply make me giddy... Thank u my dear sweetheart, deeply appreciate you!