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Could I /Would You
Could I tease you
please you
rub you down
and squeeze you
Would you tickle
with your pickle
stick it in and
let it trickle
please you
rub you down
and squeeze you
Would you tickle
with your pickle
stick it in and
let it trickle
Published 16th May 2013
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Anonymous
16th May 2013 10:03pm
tommielynn,
If I tickled
with my pickle
stuck it in
until it trickled
Would you clamp mightily
snug it tightly
with your salty brine
drown it nightly
Ha! Enjoyed your question!
tornado
If I tickled
with my pickle
stuck it in
until it trickled
Would you clamp mightily
snug it tightly
with your salty brine
drown it nightly
Ha! Enjoyed your question!
tornado
Anonymous
16th May 2013 10:13pm
If you tickled
with your pickle
stuck it in
until it trickled
I'd incite you
and delight you
And never, ever
fight you
(unless you're into that...!)
with your pickle
stuck it in
until it trickled
I'd incite you
and delight you
And never, ever
fight you
(unless you're into that...!)
16th May 2013 10:21pm
I would bury it
carry it
keep it in my
pickle case and
marry it
All day all night
guide it up in
where it fits
just right
Hehee..this was good fun!Thanks tornado!
carry it
keep it in my
pickle case and
marry it
All day all night
guide it up in
where it fits
just right
Hehee..this was good fun!Thanks tornado!
16th May 2013 10:29pm
Delight me
incite me
Never ever
fight me
for if you do
I'll bite you
CRUNCH...;)
Must have been a vlasic!!!
incite me
Never ever
fight me
for if you do
I'll bite you
CRUNCH...;)
Must have been a vlasic!!!
Anonymous
16th May 2013 11:02pm
My dear pickle
in a case
never more to gaze
upon its one-eyed face
beware if it’s buried
it’ll rise each night
doomed to search for eternity
for where it fits just right
Thank you tommielynn ; )
in a case
never more to gaze
upon its one-eyed face
beware if it’s buried
it’ll rise each night
doomed to search for eternity
for where it fits just right
Thank you tommielynn ; )
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Anonymous
16th May 2013 10:14pm
Such a fun read! =)
16th May 2013 10:30pm
Anonymous
16th May 2013 10:21pm
the pickle analogy was great tl
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