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[/font]voluptuous curves shadow the wall[/font]
[/font]pain such pain kills you so slow
all alone you hold your breath
no blood left to spill in death
-your shallow heart is doomed-
ignore all those useless dreams
cry and cry like you're mean't to scream
reveal nothing in your words
this disguise is so absurd
-your nothing but a ghost-
nothing and nothing ends a life
[/font]love no love brings forth the knife
this bloody massacre is so sublime
you wish the end of your time
-do you feel ok now-
[rest in peace young child of doom
rest your body in a stone cold tomb
leave the world you once were born
cut your hand with a roses thorn
cherish the end with open arms
be hypnotised by the devils charm
drip drip drip to the last drop
eventually for you the time will stop]
[/font][/font]
[/font]pain such pain kills you so slow
all alone you hold your breath
no blood left to spill in death
-your shallow heart is doomed-
ignore all those useless dreams
cry and cry like you're mean't to scream
reveal nothing in your words
this disguise is so absurd
-your nothing but a ghost-
nothing and nothing ends a life
[/font]love no love brings forth the knife
this bloody massacre is so sublime
you wish the end of your time
-do you feel ok now-
[rest in peace young child of doom
rest your body in a stone cold tomb
leave the world you once were born
cut your hand with a roses thorn
cherish the end with open arms
be hypnotised by the devils charm
drip drip drip to the last drop
eventually for you the time will stop]
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Published 27th Oct 2010
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27th Oct 2010 5:42pm
sarahhhhhh iiiii loveeee itttt! *o*
this poem is more than amazing and i especially adore the last stanza's in squared off brackets. so fukin' dark!!! :O :D
you've done some excellent rhyming in this poem and it made me teary just reading through it. let me write a poem with you next time we hang out with the other peopless pleaseeeeeee saraaahhhh :D
definitly keep writing!
xxxxxxx
this poem is more than amazing and i especially adore the last stanza's in squared off brackets. so fukin' dark!!! :O :D
you've done some excellent rhyming in this poem and it made me teary just reading through it. let me write a poem with you next time we hang out with the other peopless pleaseeeeeee saraaahhhh :D
definitly keep writing!
xxxxxxx
27th Oct 2010 5:44pm
i was just about to message you lol :)
once again you're way too nice with your comments lol
thanks for reading and commenting and of course we could hang out again and write a poem together :)
i'm free next week every evening?
xx
27th Oct 2010 5:45pm
too slowwww saraaahhhhh :P
and yeyyyyyy cant wait i'll call you later
*picks up pen* any evening is fine for me chick
:D
your poems are amazing and you're a beyond amazing dark writing priestess lol
xxxxxxxxxx
27th Oct 2010 5:46pm
LOL XDDD
oksssss thanksies
n nuuuu dont lie i aint amazing im not only average
xx
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27th Oct 2010 9:30pm
You really are amazing. I trully enjoyed this one. Its wonderful. Great job. :)
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