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take my life
take my life, with this masterpiece from bleeding scars
nothing left, but self destruction and broken souls
burn away, these memories into ashes of regret
take my life, with the simplest knife you hold
take my life, in the form of my last goodbye
time to go, ruptured veins scream the end
no saviour, to hold my hand while i leave
take my life, saying i'm too hard to mend
take my hand
take my heart
take my life
nothing left, but self destruction and broken souls
burn away, these memories into ashes of regret
take my life, with the simplest knife you hold
take my life, in the form of my last goodbye
time to go, ruptured veins scream the end
no saviour, to hold my hand while i leave
take my life, saying i'm too hard to mend
take my hand
take my heart
take my life
Published 2nd Nov 2010
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5th Nov 2010 4:33pm
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17th Nov 2010 8:34pm
sarah louise pashley!!! my non biological sis!
i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! your work never fails to impress me :D
the structure to this poem is so eerie and something only you could pull off with the depressive tone.
another great piece for your book,
well done sis xxx
i love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! your work never fails to impress me :D
the structure to this poem is so eerie and something only you could pull off with the depressive tone.
another great piece for your book,
well done sis xxx
18th Nov 2010 8:15am
lol :D
thanks launa you always make me smile with your lovely comments. however, i think you give me too much praise.
but yes it shall be in the book :)
x
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24th Jan 2011 4:05pm
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25th Jan 2011 1:13pm
if you aren't gunna comment nicely on my poems and try to rub it in my face that your smut gets read more than my dark stuff, then i suggest you don't look at my work. thanks.
