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I'm a Woman Now
cannibal slopes, eh?
you think i write unearthly diaries and catatonic sex stories?
You don't know me.
you think cuz i wear my celtic stitches around my throat
and kiss a tree's roots that I'm the new Gaia?
I might wear a dress and shake hands with a nigga's hand down the street, doesn't mean I'm a whore
or spit brackish poems to your sun and faithless god of command,
I'll show you who i am,
I'm that wrathful little girl you stole and tore,
I gave that legless old man a dream for his next life,
and i killed that classic rock kid from the 80's and he reincarnated into a deliberate shawl,
I'm that once -a- virgin you used to know
the one who's only proposition to a god is a saw to his throbbing and desperate cock of mortality.
you think i write unearthly diaries and catatonic sex stories?
You don't know me.
you think cuz i wear my celtic stitches around my throat
and kiss a tree's roots that I'm the new Gaia?
I might wear a dress and shake hands with a nigga's hand down the street, doesn't mean I'm a whore
or spit brackish poems to your sun and faithless god of command,
I'll show you who i am,
I'm that wrathful little girl you stole and tore,
I gave that legless old man a dream for his next life,
and i killed that classic rock kid from the 80's and he reincarnated into a deliberate shawl,
I'm that once -a- virgin you used to know
the one who's only proposition to a god is a saw to his throbbing and desperate cock of mortality.
Published 15th May 2013
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15th May 2013 3:31pm
15th May 2013 8:36pm
15th May 2013 4:50pm
and kiss a tree's roots that I'm the new Gaia?
its crazy how sometimes in sex, we nuture, we repair much like mothers do. In this case Gaia, was a good reference..the mother of all heavenly gods.
I think you're making it clear that you are no savior. Not even here.
Preach the careful preservation of your delicate femininity. No matter how briny your tongue.
Enter the cockiness... just a tad, you think. I love it though. Its not cocky if it's true.
I gave that legless old man a dream for his next life,
whoa baby. his next life.
like your carnal influence set up what hasn't even been lived yet. that's power
and i killed that classic rock kid from the 80's and he reincarnated into a deliberate shawl,
shawl. ouch. really, all you could do was wear him around your shoulders. damn. sometime we are more powerful than we know, sadly our powers can also hurt, mame, bless, change but it always affects.
Clio, darling.. i'm baffled by the last two lines. PM me your focus.. I'm curious and don't want to misunderstand.
Lovely and heart-wrenching reading you this morning.
its crazy how sometimes in sex, we nuture, we repair much like mothers do. In this case Gaia, was a good reference..the mother of all heavenly gods.
I think you're making it clear that you are no savior. Not even here.
Preach the careful preservation of your delicate femininity. No matter how briny your tongue.
Enter the cockiness... just a tad, you think. I love it though. Its not cocky if it's true.
I gave that legless old man a dream for his next life,
whoa baby. his next life.
like your carnal influence set up what hasn't even been lived yet. that's power
and i killed that classic rock kid from the 80's and he reincarnated into a deliberate shawl,
shawl. ouch. really, all you could do was wear him around your shoulders. damn. sometime we are more powerful than we know, sadly our powers can also hurt, mame, bless, change but it always affects.
Clio, darling.. i'm baffled by the last two lines. PM me your focus.. I'm curious and don't want to misunderstand.
Lovely and heart-wrenching reading you this morning.
15th May 2013 8:39pm
Thank you for all of your comments.
You do not misunderstand at all, and this morning I didn't realize that I was on edge until i stip it out on DU.
I will admit now,
i have some power in my words.
And your'e right, It's not cocky if it's true.
Love, Clio
You do not misunderstand at all, and this morning I didn't realize that I was on edge until i stip it out on DU.
I will admit now,
i have some power in my words.
And your'e right, It's not cocky if it's true.
Love, Clio
17th May 2013 6:16pm
I also like that you enjoy getting inside my head without a flinch, I'm impressed
15th May 2013 5:01pm
I had to log back in. Cause I had another thought:
and i killed that classic rock kid from the 80's and he reincarnated into a deliberate shawl,
this could totally been quite a remorseful moment. realization of our own crimes; committed to forgiving, and in his reincarnation, his memory, covers you like a shawl.
interesting..
and i killed that classic rock kid from the 80's and he reincarnated into a deliberate shawl,
this could totally been quite a remorseful moment. realization of our own crimes; committed to forgiving, and in his reincarnation, his memory, covers you like a shawl.
interesting..
15th May 2013 8:40pm
It could mean both Mici,
but I feel as if your'e the only woman that understands me.
but I feel as if your'e the only woman that understands me.
15th May 2013 8:24pm
15th May 2013 8:41pm
16th May 2013 4:09am
the intensity & spitefulness. You're right you do have power in your words and I was struck
17th May 2013 6:13pm
Intensity? Hell yes. Spiteful? O no honey, spite gets no one anywhere, but I would say this poem expresses my ability to freeze my audience, make them go back and read my poem again and think twice.
No not spiteful at all.
Tantalizing.
No not spiteful at all.
Tantalizing.
18th May 2013 3:47pm
