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i love all that colors, that's why you should too
let's start with red
a horror movie
would be nothing without it
and those are my favorite
that's why it's my favorite too.
orange
is a poet's nightmare
because it can't
rhyme.
yellow is easy
that's hello.
green
is for
weed
as if you didn't see
that one coming.
blue
is a poet's wet dream
because we all
are.
purple is for
the long sleeve shirt i put on
because something is wrong with the spring heat
and it's too cold in my apartment.
pink
is
for
vaginas
yay!
brown
is
for
assholes
yeah!
white
is for
crackers
black
is for
...
olives
and gray
is for
everything
in between
so in all actuality
it makes
just a plain awful
ending.
a horror movie
would be nothing without it
and those are my favorite
that's why it's my favorite too.
orange
is a poet's nightmare
because it can't
rhyme.
yellow is easy
that's hello.
green
is for
weed
as if you didn't see
that one coming.
blue
is a poet's wet dream
because we all
are.
purple is for
the long sleeve shirt i put on
because something is wrong with the spring heat
and it's too cold in my apartment.
pink
is
for
vaginas
yay!
brown
is
for
assholes
yeah!
white
is for
crackers
black
is for
...
olives
and gray
is for
everything
in between
so in all actuality
it makes
just a plain awful
ending.
Published 14th May 2013
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14th May 2013 00:55am
14th May 2013 3:56am
Anonymous
14th May 2013 8:39am
Never thought of a rainbow of color like that, the pink and brown, lol.....
Great write...
Great write...
14th May 2013 9:16am
16th May 2013 6:52am
I LOVE THIS;)It shows so much personality,and character...Great job Space...(I'm gonna call you Space now.)
16th May 2013 7:31am
17th May 2013 2:39am
19th May 2013 5:56pm
You have a wonderful sense of humor and an awesome style. Very enjoyable read!
19th May 2013 7:14pm
This was completely hilarious. You have a killer sense of humor. I especially liked blue and pink :3
Yes it can--orange. If one really wants to do with it what one does with other words, like, simply rhyming the last syllable, it could rhyme with fringe, binge, syringe, tinge, hinge, etc. Well, that's not necessarily perfect rhyming, but it has been done, yes? Personally, if one is talking about rhyme, while I'm not particularly partial to rhyme, I like it when the stressed syllables of the words in question rhyme, no matter where they are in each word. That's rhyming, to me. Orange, core, for, four, floor, flora, lore, more, nor, gore, etc. Otherwise, why would a word like, say, freeze, rhyme with a word like, disease? The stressed syllables rhyme, so we say the words rhyme.
Ok, that was a minute part of a much larger thing, and really quite beside the point. This is interesting. I once wrote a poem, or several evolutions of one, that associated thoughts and things with numbers. Different numbers have had different meanings to me. Looking back on them, they weren't all that great. This piece is much better. It takes the reader on a deeper, more thorough trip through the connections.
Ok, that was a minute part of a much larger thing, and really quite beside the point. This is interesting. I once wrote a poem, or several evolutions of one, that associated thoughts and things with numbers. Different numbers have had different meanings to me. Looking back on them, they weren't all that great. This piece is much better. It takes the reader on a deeper, more thorough trip through the connections.
21st May 2013 9:27am
i was just trying to be catchy
you can rhyme orange with porridge
but thank you
so much
everybody
=].
you can rhyme orange with porridge
but thank you
so much
everybody
=].
