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Shadow of the Rain
Do you ever wonder why
the first rain of Spring
was so refreshing?
The birds chirping, awakening
the flowers from hibernation -
their sweet scent brings HOPE
of a new beginning...
After the rain comes a beautiful SHADOW -
painted brightly by the sun
in multi-colored arc...
The spectrum of light is so deceiving
and so does good LOOKS!
For what we see, is not what it seems.
the first rain of Spring
was so refreshing?
The birds chirping, awakening
the flowers from hibernation -
their sweet scent brings HOPE
of a new beginning...
After the rain comes a beautiful SHADOW -
painted brightly by the sun
in multi-colored arc...
The spectrum of light is so deceiving
and so does good LOOKS!
For what we see, is not what it seems.
Published 10th May 2013
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10th May 2013 4:35pm
You hit the nail on the head mate. Hope is what awakens our hearts and spirits.
Damn good write as usual.
Damn good write as usual.
12th May 2013 6:08am
Yes it does, mate...and HOPE is all we got!
Thank you very much for your nice comment.
Thank you very much for your nice comment.
14th May 2013 7:38am
"The spectrum of light is so deceiving
and so does good LOOKS!
For what we see, is not what it seems"<--my new favorite quote for the week!
Well said! Xo
and so does good LOOKS!
For what we see, is not what it seems"<--my new favorite quote for the week!
Well said! Xo
14th May 2013 5:27pm
Those flattering remarks of yours makes me feel humbled, and at the same time makes me happy for someone like you appreciates my work!
great metaphor ...I dug the way you approached this..a little misdirection then BAM...haha...and the accompanying photo really helped drive home your point...point well taken..so the next time I meet a beautiful woman with little substance I'll tell her 'she's as beautiful as a rainbow' she'll probably start cheesin from ear to ear not knowin i just paid her a backhanded compliment..haha..great work bro.
20th May 2013 1:46pm
Tanks Naajir...I'm glad you like the way I approach this piece. Thanks for reading and for the compliments!
