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partial recall
i can tell
there are ghosts here in this house
that have witnessed
all the underhanded things i've done
i just hope they don't write it down
and pass it along
as some sort of deja vu like comfort
to other lowlifes to give some sort of solace
when they behave the same
hello lady
have you some type of remedy
for this static ailment
i think i saw someplace nice once
but i bumped my head and was denied entrance
like a bird who flew into the sliding glass doors
there are ghosts here in this house
that have witnessed
all the underhanded things i've done
i just hope they don't write it down
and pass it along
as some sort of deja vu like comfort
to other lowlifes to give some sort of solace
when they behave the same
hello lady
have you some type of remedy
for this static ailment
i think i saw someplace nice once
but i bumped my head and was denied entrance
like a bird who flew into the sliding glass doors
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Re: partial recall
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- Edited 11th Jul 2013 00:57am
9th May 2013 6:49pm
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re: Re: partial recall
10th May 2013 2:04am
not so much not happy. i would'nt change a thing. jus kinda dictating through it mam.
thanx broom...
thanx broom...
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10th May 2013 3:03am
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9th May 2013 6:53pm
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10th May 2013 2:05am
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Re: partial recall
Anonymous
9th May 2013 7:51pm
me too jr....have it here
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10th May 2013 2:06am
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9th May 2013 8:59pm
Re: partial recall
9th May 2013 10:52pm
Mr Rot ...
this
"i think i saw someplace nice once
but i bumped my head and was denied entrance
like a bird who flew into the sliding glass doors"
was just perfect :)
this
"i think i saw someplace nice once
but i bumped my head and was denied entrance
like a bird who flew into the sliding glass doors"
was just perfect :)
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re: Re: partial recall
10th May 2013 2:07am
you know i sat for hours tryin to continue after that line and nothing worked miss maggs. so at that point i just left it as is.
thank you mam...
thank you mam...
Re: partial recall
10th May 2013 3:18am
This is awesome, bro. Very surreal and gave me great imagery within my mind. I feel the ghost's eyes at times, too. In fact, the first stanza took me back to my old house...
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Re: partial recall
11th May 2013 5:54pm
"i think i saw someplace nice once"
On closer inspection, the sign read...
Normal people only, below that
whites only..
On closer inspection, the sign read...
Normal people only, below that
whites only..
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Re: partial recall
Anonymous
24th May 2013 3:05pm
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Re: partial recall
7th Jun 2013 1:27pm
"i can tell
there are ghosts here in this house
that have witnessed
all the underhanded things i've done " This conjured up the image of 'The walls have eyes', I must say this is indeed a very interesting piece and keeps the reader reading until the very end~ Excellent work :)~
there are ghosts here in this house
that have witnessed
all the underhanded things i've done " This conjured up the image of 'The walls have eyes', I must say this is indeed a very interesting piece and keeps the reader reading until the very end~ Excellent work :)~
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