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Let's write. (Violets erotic challenge) aka fishy :-)
write me
describe how my soft lips felt on your flesh
and how the moon shook
write how two words passed between us
but much was said
and much was lost
within tangled sheets
and sweaty hands entwined above our joined foreheads
write on how
the finer things tasted
or the way our blissful sounds
played like music
no one could hear
if so we wouldn't have noticed
write about us
the way we love
the curve of my hips
your square jaw
that I long to nibble on
or how my back arches to you
to give you all of me
and how i live to take every part of you in
to please just you
write about this
write about all of this
describe how my soft lips felt on your flesh
and how the moon shook
write how two words passed between us
but much was said
and much was lost
within tangled sheets
and sweaty hands entwined above our joined foreheads
write on how
the finer things tasted
or the way our blissful sounds
played like music
no one could hear
if so we wouldn't have noticed
write about us
the way we love
the curve of my hips
your square jaw
that I long to nibble on
or how my back arches to you
to give you all of me
and how i live to take every part of you in
to please just you
write about this
write about all of this
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Re: Let's write. (Violets erotic challenge) aka fishy :-)
9th May 2013 1:53am
i'm not really good at commenting on this style but that is pretty damn hot.....
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9th May 2013 2:29am
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9th May 2013 5:39am
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9th May 2013 5:53am
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9th May 2013 3:36pm
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9th May 2013 4:36pm
Re: Let's write. (Violets erotic challenge) aka fishy :-)
9th May 2013 5:12pm
This is so sensual and hot.....like warm, white cream cuming to a boil..... ; )
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9th May 2013 11:19pm
Re: Let's write. (Violets erotic challenge) aka fishy :-)
12th May 2013 4:30am
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12th May 2013 1:58pm
Re: Let's write. (Violets erotic challenge) aka fishy :-)
13th May 2013 8:44pm
my back arches to you,dynamite absolute dynamite
thats hot
seems personal,beautiful write
sean
thats hot
seems personal,beautiful write
sean
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14th May 2013 3:11am
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23rd Jun 2013 9:55pm
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26th Jun 2013 4:46am