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Condom Machine
You remind me of the candy girl,
Also a part time whore,
And she did good business in both.
Her soft organs un-protected,
And could be used in cheap,
Like a vending machine with a stock.
The question is …To use you or not,
Fuck with you or fuck you?
While you are standing in your tempting pose,
Shall I wait for the evening dark?
[b][i]Condom Machine is an urban satire that attacks the government half-boiled efforts in creating an environment for safer sex. However, to the contrary, most of the machines are either installed in the places challenging hygiene and exchanging hepatitis or gangrene for AIDS or end up in selling sub grades at cheaper rates that serves no purpose. Even where they have been installed in mass public places cultural shyness pre-dominated sexual awareness. As a result they have been pulled off.[/i][/b]
Also a part time whore,
And she did good business in both.
Her soft organs un-protected,
And could be used in cheap,
Like a vending machine with a stock.
The question is …To use you or not,
Fuck with you or fuck you?
While you are standing in your tempting pose,
Shall I wait for the evening dark?
[b][i]Condom Machine is an urban satire that attacks the government half-boiled efforts in creating an environment for safer sex. However, to the contrary, most of the machines are either installed in the places challenging hygiene and exchanging hepatitis or gangrene for AIDS or end up in selling sub grades at cheaper rates that serves no purpose. Even where they have been installed in mass public places cultural shyness pre-dominated sexual awareness. As a result they have been pulled off.[/i][/b]
Published 21st Oct 2010
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21st Oct 2010 10:14am
it seems that you have come out of your shell and created this wonderful orgasmic poem full of hidden truths and meanings!
excellent!
excellent!
and as you have given me this super distinction, I m flying at the top of the world. Again thank you for adding the same to your reading list.
21st Oct 2010 10:37am
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21st Oct 2010 5:19pm
Effective expression of all-consuming lust, how one can be overwhelmed by testosterone, and how the government does nothing to combat the possible resultant problems, such as AIDs. The comparison of the machine to a whore was masterful, and the phrase "un-protected organs" subtly disturbing.
wow! well done. your poetry always seems to have something useful to say, i very much enjoy that. you really come at issues with vivacity and creativity. keep it up! i'll keep reading. [:
25th Oct 2010 10:44am
Again from you and I wish I continue the same when you read me in the future. Thanks again.
