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i shall want need nothing
i shall want
need nothing
no, as i thee wed
amongst this
black-red flower bed
and with
this ring i,
thee, we are one
to life
i am yours
and yours a wife
bright sun less
warm than our love
and smiles bright
upon us, upon all
come we before
night it is
need nothing
no, as i thee wed
amongst this
black-red flower bed
and with
this ring i,
thee, we are one
to life
i am yours
and yours a wife
bright sun less
warm than our love
and smiles bright
upon us, upon all
come we before
night it is
Published 7th May 2013
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Anonymous
7th May 2013 6:53pm
These lines, in particular, are truly beautiful:
bright sun less
warm than our love
and smiles bright
upon us,
Lovely work, Faith. So very glad you're back. I'm enjoying the return of your precious poems. Well done! :)
Carlene
bright sun less
warm than our love
and smiles bright
upon us,
Lovely work, Faith. So very glad you're back. I'm enjoying the return of your precious poems. Well done! :)
Carlene
8th May 2013 1:44am
Thank you so much, Carlene. I am honored by your wonderful comments. I really missed you. Faith
8th May 2013 00:31am
Good to read your work again Faith, I really liked the rhythm and the feel of this, it's Real!..
Cheers! Scot.
Cheers! Scot.
8th May 2013 1:45am
Anonymous
8th May 2013 1:27am
Welcome back gracious Lady! This is beautiful!!!!!! Your words are breathtaking. :)
8th May 2013 1:41am
You just made my heart smile, my friend. Thank you for the lovliest of compliments. I missed you alot, flowergirl! Faith
