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I Crave
I want to get lost in you
my craving for intimacy
grows intense this day
my eyes seek the refuge I
only find in yours
as we lie our bodies
side by side
face to face comforting
each other with our
hands which roam
freely over curves
till they rest on parts
that bring only pleasure
while lips press with
a hunger swallowing our need
making the connection
fulfilling the quest
deepening our emotion
my craving for intimacy
grows intense this day
my eyes seek the refuge I
only find in yours
as we lie our bodies
side by side
face to face comforting
each other with our
hands which roam
freely over curves
till they rest on parts
that bring only pleasure
while lips press with
a hunger swallowing our need
making the connection
fulfilling the quest
deepening our emotion
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5th May 2013 3:22pm
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Re: I Crave
5th May 2013 6:09pm
hot
love this: my eyes seek the refuge I
only find in yours !great great line!
love this: my eyes seek the refuge I
only find in yours !great great line!
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Anonymous
7th May 2013 3:52pm
A beautiful expression of spiritual bond born out of romantic interludes. I like your voice Luna.
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8th May 2013 3:38am
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Anonymous
8th May 2013 8:17am
There's often great wisdom between the lines. I really like how you capture the beauty of sexual intimacy
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Anonymous
8th May 2013 10:57pm
Like a garnet or peridot gem? Or an emerald or sapphire gem? :) Thank you!
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9th Oct 2014 2:02am