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Would you Offer to be Him
Now, think of the man who has fallen
he's surrounded by angels he can't trust
would you offer to be him in this moment
as they ravage his body with lust
They'll be grabbing from all around him
breathing heavy as they strip him bare
would you offer to be him in this moment
if promised pleasures beyond all compare
Divine gifts to him the'll be giving
no thing is sweeter and so he'd give in
would you offer to be him in this moment
even if death were the cost of his sin
he's surrounded by angels he can't trust
would you offer to be him in this moment
as they ravage his body with lust
They'll be grabbing from all around him
breathing heavy as they strip him bare
would you offer to be him in this moment
if promised pleasures beyond all compare
Divine gifts to him the'll be giving
no thing is sweeter and so he'd give in
would you offer to be him in this moment
even if death were the cost of his sin
Published 4th May 2013
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4th May 2013 9:16pm
4th May 2013 9:35pm
ah...but won't those naughty little angels count on you to think with the other ;)
5th May 2013 00:29am
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6th May 2013 4:50pm
Deborahlee3313,
"If" he had fallen...."if" death were inevitable...it would be a hell of a send off ; ) Nice contemplative write ; )
tornado
"If" he had fallen...."if" death were inevitable...it would be a hell of a send off ; ) Nice contemplative write ; )
tornado
6th May 2013 6:20pm
ah I am sure he would have made his final exit with a smile
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