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The sweet delight a woman's sight
Her form for me to view
Inside a fire it will ignite
And fill her with it too.
What sweet scent a woman's dew
Strengthens great Lebanon
Filling soul and body so
While screaming her lovers song.
Why the taste a woman sweet
With touch but softened deed
To bring my chest's excited breath
And drown her dripping need.
Ecstasy, sweet woman's feel
Her essence senses these
Lust, she hungers it from me
The whole of her I'll please.
Her form for me to view
Inside a fire it will ignite
And fill her with it too.
What sweet scent a woman's dew
Strengthens great Lebanon
Filling soul and body so
While screaming her lovers song.
Why the taste a woman sweet
With touch but softened deed
To bring my chest's excited breath
And drown her dripping need.
Ecstasy, sweet woman's feel
Her essence senses these
Lust, she hungers it from me
The whole of her I'll please.
Published 25th Apr 2013
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25th Apr 2013 5:07pm
Ecstasy, sweet woman's feel
Her essence senses these
Lust, she hungers it from me
The whole of her I'll please...LOVE THIS VERSE..
Her essence senses these
Lust, she hungers it from me
The whole of her I'll please...LOVE THIS VERSE..
25th Apr 2013 5:29pm
25th Apr 2013 6:27pm
Wow. First of all, welcome! Second of all, wow, this poem is incredible! The rhyming, the rhythm, the non-explicit description, as a whole, simply incredible work!
25th Apr 2013 7:45pm
26th Apr 2013 2:18pm
26th Apr 2013 7:02pm
Great write ...
Every word was tingling
every part of me!
You have a way with
words and I look
forward to reading more!
Every word was tingling
every part of me!
You have a way with
words and I look
forward to reading more!
27th Apr 2013 4:19am
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