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Blessing
He put his head down as she grinded his gears
She was hunting for that rush of creamy liquid
Swallowing him whole until she reached his end
Tapping his round full hangers with her tongue
Beckoning him to let go of his flavors in her mouth
Easing his length deep in her she knew he was ready
His throbbing muscle exploding into her throat
She pulls him out and he blesses her face
He gave her what she was hunting for
She was hunting for that rush of creamy liquid
Swallowing him whole until she reached his end
Tapping his round full hangers with her tongue
Beckoning him to let go of his flavors in her mouth
Easing his length deep in her she knew he was ready
His throbbing muscle exploding into her throat
She pulls him out and he blesses her face
He gave her what she was hunting for
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Re: Blessing
25th Apr 2013 3:30pm
Hot depiction! A pleasure to read! Love it love it love it! (Can you tell I'm aroused right now?)
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25th Apr 2013 3:35pm
Re: Blessing
25th Apr 2013 3:30pm
i love the title it's not what i expected but it gave it's meaning for your sensual poem here. i especially like the ending verse, very kinky but funny
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25th Apr 2013 4:39pm
Wow, very arousing one here. Great description of one act that every guy loves to recieve and do.
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2013 7:22pm
Damn, it doesn't take much to know what's going on there! It's great. It's explicit but not so much to allow an EXTREME CONTENT rating so I clap you for not selecting that option.
As a poem, it's good, but I think more could be done with it. You got the point across but I think a slight extension of the story behind it would also fit nicely. Good job!
As a poem, it's good, but I think more could be done with it. You got the point across but I think a slight extension of the story behind it would also fit nicely. Good job!
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25th Apr 2013 9:36pm