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Twisting my mind
Mind twisted by illicit longing
Words caress my cerebral g-spot
Switching vanilla taste to erotic gourmet
Eyes licking every inch of you
In my wicked wanting
Fingers writing the secret of
Lascivious wanton lust
The worst of you plays
A staccato beat in my chest
This unexpected desire
Might be the death of me
As it draws me headfirst
Into your hot sweet water
Drinking deeply with abandon
Thighs quiver helplessly
With the pulse of electronic message
I am a slave to this addiction
Your devilish wicked drug
Keep twisting me sweet one
Don't stop this forbidden journey
Till my lips cry out your name
Published 23rd Apr 2013
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23rd Apr 2013 6:06am
Beautifully penned; thought-provoking and well-tempered. Great job! P.S. Welcome to DU!
23rd Apr 2013 5:20pm
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23rd Apr 2013 6:52am
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23rd Apr 2013 3:09pm
23rd Apr 2013 5:19pm
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2013 3:20pm
lilreddevil,
A slow, twisting illicit longing you have worked up there. Nice. Welcome to DU!
tornado
A slow, twisting illicit longing you have worked up there. Nice. Welcome to DU!
tornado
23rd Apr 2013 5:17pm
Thank you for letting me share it with you...a little twisting is so much fun!! ;-*
23rd Apr 2013 9:04pm
Very nice and naughty. Love the act portrayed in your writing. Welcome to DU as well.
23rd Apr 2013 10:55pm
24th Apr 2013 7:04am
Indeed with sex starting in the brain, this poem makes so much sense to me. You add a taste for the tongue and music among the literary flourishes and the result is an erotic gem.
25th Apr 2013 5:11am
24th Apr 2013 11:23pm
woah
This unexpected desire
Might be the death of me
As it draws me headfirst
Into your hot sweet water ...smokin hot line
This unexpected desire
Might be the death of me
As it draws me headfirst
Into your hot sweet water ...smokin hot line
25th Apr 2013 5:12am
Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 2:31am
Very hot write. :)
28th Apr 2013 3:12am
