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About kisses
I'd lose myself
with my lips on your back;
I would write a sonnet
with the tip of the tongue,
between the shoulder blades
to feel you tingle.
I'd profit of your thrills,
and your languor,
to go lower.
I'd make you turn, then,
to caress your beautiful buttocks
while I sink my tongue
in your torrid navel.
I would beg you then,
on my knees,
to let me go down further
and ...
I would spend an eternity to kiss
in the place of my dreams.
I'd like. instead,
that your kisses
would become bites;
in blood, or almost:
I would love to
feel your teeth in my flesh
You could vent
on the lobes of my ears,
on the neck,
on the lips ...
But I would ask you,
please,
to be cruel, extremely cruel,
with my nipples.
I'll hug you tight against my body
while you give me pain and pleasure,
and you'd feel, my erection
press and grow strongly
between your breasts.
I'd wonder,
at this point,
if you would like
to be grabbed by the hair
on the nape
and be thrust
to devour me
lower
Would YOU?
with my lips on your back;
I would write a sonnet
with the tip of the tongue,
between the shoulder blades
to feel you tingle.
I'd profit of your thrills,
and your languor,
to go lower.
I'd make you turn, then,
to caress your beautiful buttocks
while I sink my tongue
in your torrid navel.
I would beg you then,
on my knees,
to let me go down further
and ...
I would spend an eternity to kiss
in the place of my dreams.
I'd like. instead,
that your kisses
would become bites;
in blood, or almost:
I would love to
feel your teeth in my flesh
You could vent
on the lobes of my ears,
on the neck,
on the lips ...
But I would ask you,
please,
to be cruel, extremely cruel,
with my nipples.
I'll hug you tight against my body
while you give me pain and pleasure,
and you'd feel, my erection
press and grow strongly
between your breasts.
I'd wonder,
at this point,
if you would like
to be grabbed by the hair
on the nape
and be thrust
to devour me
lower
Would YOU?
Written by
Luca
(Luca Della Casa)
Published 22nd Apr 2013
| Edited 23rd Apr 2013
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Re: About kisses
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2013 2:20am
Luca - I missed you and I missed your poetry.
This poem is like all your poems: well written and delightful. Thank you for the pleasure of a good read.
Yes I would......
With best regards,
Kitty
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This poem is like all your poems: well written and delightful. Thank you for the pleasure of a good read.
Yes I would......
With best regards,
Kitty
x0x0x0x0
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re: Re: About kisses
22nd Apr 2013 3:05am
U would!
I'm sure of that.
your is not a theater
you are a real woman and passionate.
I'm proud to be your friend and your lover in my dreams
I'll fantasize of your teeth on my nipples honey ;)
A kiss
Luca
I'm sure of that.
your is not a theater
you are a real woman and passionate.
I'm proud to be your friend and your lover in my dreams
I'll fantasize of your teeth on my nipples honey ;)
A kiss
Luca
Re: About kisses
22nd Apr 2013 2:54am
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23rd Apr 2013 2:05pm
Re: About kisses
22nd Apr 2013 4:32am
YES!!! Wonderful, erotic write dear Luca!! So nice to have you back!
Hugs and biting kisses,
Amazon
Hugs and biting kisses,
Amazon
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re: Re: About kisses
23rd Apr 2013 2:13pm
Hi Amazon
rare kisses ... want them to bleed, please ...
A sonet on U'r back
Luca
rare kisses ... want them to bleed, please ...
A sonet on U'r back
Luca
Re: About kisses
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2013 10:33am
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re: Re: About kisses
23rd Apr 2013 2:18pm
Ciao amico mio
a little 'romanticism
on the tip of the tongue
before the rare meat
thanks for your always kind comments
a little 'romanticism
on the tip of the tongue
before the rare meat
thanks for your always kind comments
Re: About kisses
22nd Apr 2013 2:21pm
jeez,Luca....behave yrself!
nice erotica rite-----give
Gabe
"a-run-for-his-money",
as
wee say in amerika(d'bootyfull)
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re: Re: About kisses
23rd Apr 2013 2:29pm
Buongiorno caro Maestro
I swear on the Virgin Maria:
this time I struggle to understand what you mean.
Must be my fault ...
I hope you have enjoyed these verses.
I am very glad and proud when you read my stuff.
a hug
Luca
I swear on the Virgin Maria:
this time I struggle to understand what you mean.
Must be my fault ...
I hope you have enjoyed these verses.
I am very glad and proud when you read my stuff.
a hug
Luca
re: re: Re: About kisses
23rd Apr 2013 6:22pm
just referring Amanecio's
almost total focus on thee 'erotica', & you presenting some
'friendly competition' wit this write.....
almost total focus on thee 'erotica', & you presenting some
'friendly competition' wit this write.....
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Re: About kisses
23rd Apr 2013 3:36am
EEEK!!!!! OH MY GOD!!! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT AND..... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fantastic write, Luca. :)
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23rd Apr 2013 2:02pm
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24th Apr 2013 4:06am
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24th Apr 2013 6:38pm
re: Re: About kisses
25th Apr 2013 1:44pm
Hello beautiful
I'm not writing many erotic verses, lately.
I hate them when they put the flag as extreme.
As in this case: these lines do not seem so extreme ...
What a hypocritical world!
Neoliberalism and the cluster bombs are extreme.
Preventive wars and institutionalized torture are extreme ... Not to mention the queues of unemployed in southern Europe: Spain, Italy, Greece ... you know what I mean.
I have some fascist follower and moralist ass hole,in my networks where I share my things,
that is dedicated to harass me.
Thanks again for reading and supporting me always.
Love u honey ;)
I'm not writing many erotic verses, lately.
I hate them when they put the flag as extreme.
As in this case: these lines do not seem so extreme ...
What a hypocritical world!
Neoliberalism and the cluster bombs are extreme.
Preventive wars and institutionalized torture are extreme ... Not to mention the queues of unemployed in southern Europe: Spain, Italy, Greece ... you know what I mean.
I have some fascist follower and moralist ass hole,in my networks where I share my things,
that is dedicated to harass me.
Thanks again for reading and supporting me always.
Love u honey ;)
Re: About kisses
29th Dec 2013 9:29am
I'm never caused physical pain, and am a submissive. This is like tempting me to taste the tainted fruit. I really liked it. Best Wishes.
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Re: About kisses
27th Aug 2014 7:28pm
I love the first stanza
But the last one...man the last one
was great.
I really like the whole thing.
Thanks for sharing poet.
But the last one...man the last one
was great.
I really like the whole thing.
Thanks for sharing poet.
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