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Darlin; Sugar...

This is for Amber, RedRose's  "True Feelings"  competition
This is still very much a rough draft in the makin howevers

Sugar Darlin
You could very easily be the love of my life
Don’t you EVER release me
The mornin sunrises with your hello to me
and it sets in your goodnights
In your eyes I can see the sun rising and setting,
Without you, the sun rises late,
an the dawn, she has to wait,
Ooo my Sweet Darlin;
How can I ever tell you
that you make me want to live,
I stayed alive because of you
I live an I breath for you,
Kiss me and breath into me my lifes breath,
Before you, I felt deaths cold dead hands,
taking me down forever,
You reached in an saved me with just a smile,
A certain stare, a look none other has anymore for me…
Darlin, Sugar;
How I need you, more than anything that came before,
I Love you, more than anyone I knew before;
Want you, more than any drug or addiction I had before,
Is that sacrilege, or would it be worse not to admit it
I built my life around you
Lovers forever, now, and unto the half of my kingdom
Written by deadwolf
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