Ashes

A dark write of passages indeed Dear Crim.
Your ink always grinds truths in starkness.
we are only as evil as we feel, we live hell in the ways it is delivered each individual...we all walk our way trying to escape it...Never shall burn what is a trying soul-so says Soul
Head Up Kind Crim!!!

thank you peaceful Soul for inspiring words of encouragement..peace Crim

Raw, Crim.

This poem bears a lot of weight,
definitely one of your best.

Definitely.

Scribbs.

thank you dear Scribbler that touches my heart..peace Crim

I feel that fear each day Crim. Poignant words deep soul.

Dearest Noctem you have a beautiful heart..you have nothing to fear lovely soul..much love Crim

You always expose your reality in raw imagery...drive on crim one day at a time...

thank you kind Strider..peace Crim

I have felt this way..and I'm sure the last time I did wasn't the last time.
Darkness infused with the moment's brutal honesty.
heartfelt words....
great pen..peace n love,
miki

thank you Miki for getting this poem..much love Crim

I escaped all of my hell's by escaping inside my head, the mind can travel and the spirit can fly, even if the body is stuck.  That is how I got through so much, I often ink my otherworld's.

Very profound and poignant Crim, I feel you reaching out.  Excellent release dear. :)

thank you beautiful Magdalena for the insightful advise..peace Crim :)

"though i've lived an ugly life
and like the grindstone it's beaten me down
powdered me into ashes blown about by the smallest winds

I wish I could say i've grown stronger for the experinece
but i've only become afraid
scared of what is to come heaven or hell for the deeds i've done"

Your words show a beautiful soul, a talented writer and a sophisticated poem.  Just by your insight and acknowledgment you will rise.
You have nowhere to go but up.
Peace

thank you yes I must rise from the ashes..wishing you peace Crim

Yes, I think most people have. I like to think something can only be beautiful untill after it looks repulsive. A psychological thing maybe but it's how I precipice things I like. This was a captivating poem from your heart and it shows. I don't believe hell would claim such an earnest person.

Thank you Kourtni for getting my poem and putting my mind at peace..much love Crim

A walk along the Pacific coast at dusk can give us a glimpse of "heaven" and let us see no matter the depth of poor choices we make, hope rises daily with the sun:)

You're so right Ken I love the ocean and walks on the beach and I can see heaven from there..thank you..peace Crim

Powerfu;l Ink Sis,
Because you can write about it...
Shows you are not beaten

Becasue you can express
Means there are more battles for you to win!



XOXO
Fire

thank you dear Fire for the lovely words of inspiration..you calm my soul..peace Crim

I too have have searched for a source water that could hydrate me, but part take in soda which on fool me into false sense of comfort.

Wonderful ink work!

Thanks for sharing.  

thank you wishing you peace Crim :)