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My Love
The sunshine on your
face, is like looking
into grace.
The glistening in your
eyes, tells me our
love will never die.
The warmth of your touch,
sends embers of fire
through me.
The sound of your voice,
is like a trickling stream.
Your soft wispers
comfort me.
Your gentle touch
protects me.
I know inside me,
that you will always
love me.
face, is like looking
into grace.
The glistening in your
eyes, tells me our
love will never die.
The warmth of your touch,
sends embers of fire
through me.
The sound of your voice,
is like a trickling stream.
Your soft wispers
comfort me.
Your gentle touch
protects me.
I know inside me,
that you will always
love me.
Published 19th Apr 2013
| Edited 21st Apr 2013
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19th Apr 2013 10:03pm
I wrote this yesterday for a very close and special friend of mine. I hope he likes it.
19th Apr 2013 11:48pm
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20th Apr 2013 1:38am
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21st Apr 2013 1:33am
Third line of stanza three, you might want to change 'though' to 'thRough'. Otherwise, it was great! ;)
