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I Beg You
I want you
to
want
me
I need you
to
look
at me
like I
look at
you
My feelings
are
uncontrolable
lustful
down right
dirty
I beg you
on my
hands
and
knees
Take me
Want me
Need me
I'm begging
Tell me
I'm dirty
I want to
hear it
whisper
your
hot
breath
on my
naked
back
Look at me
with your
bad intent
I know
you
want
to
I'm begging
you
please
please
devour me
Like you
have
done
before
to
want
me
I need you
to
look
at me
like I
look at
you
My feelings
are
uncontrolable
lustful
down right
dirty
I beg you
on my
hands
and
knees
Take me
Want me
Need me
I'm begging
Tell me
I'm dirty
I want to
hear it
whisper
your
hot
breath
on my
naked
back
Look at me
with your
bad intent
I know
you
want
to
I'm begging
you
please
please
devour me
Like you
have
done
before
Published 19th Apr 2013
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19th Apr 2013 3:44pm
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19th Apr 2013 5:55pm
19th Apr 2013 5:53pm
This reasonates with me so much, that feeling of wanting just to be wanted, reduced to begging. It's like every single line is pulled right from my head! Of all the feelings I've felt, this one is one of the hardest, you've captured it perfectly in a poem that reads with ease and emotion, good job!
19th Apr 2013 5:59pm
Thank you Deepest_Fantasy!
I hate begging for something/someone that should just WANT me just as bad!
Hmmmm...I want to be wanted ;) that's all!!
I hate begging for something/someone that should just WANT me just as bad!
Hmmmm...I want to be wanted ;) that's all!!
19th Apr 2013 8:11pm
19th Apr 2013 8:31pm
Anonymous
19th Apr 2013 8:36pm
tommielynn,
Nothing wrong with a little beg every now and then to spark the ember. Just make sure they understand the stream flows both ways ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
Nothing wrong with a little beg every now and then to spark the ember. Just make sure they understand the stream flows both ways ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
Anonymous
19th Apr 2013 9:15pm
that's begging for sure tl
strider
strider
19th Apr 2013 9:21pm
beautiful, As Iread it, you took me back to momnets of lust when my husband would whisper "dirty girl" in my ear
