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Oceans Of Whiskey
Today the whiskey dried up
fuck I feel so dry inside
drinking beers to fill me
pissing every twenty minutes
without getting off all filler
no climax
it didn't take me to that place of magic
where my brain is turned to mush
forgetting for a moment the death march i'm on
on a good whiskey day I get pissed
three sheets to the wind
crawling to my room
where I fall off the bed in the middle of the night
unlucky I didn't bash my skull and end it all
the pied piper calling to me
drink, swill get lost in another world
one where i'm not socially inept
a place where things make sense
somewhere I can forget
the pain that fillets my innards
tears at my being
I wake in the morning and sneak a drink
trying so hard to hide the fact that i'm drunk by ten am
slurring my words no one is fooled
the truth is I love being a drunk
it makes me feel alive
even with a slow death breathing down my neck
bottoms up, cheers and all that
today was a bad day
no oceans of whiskey to get lost in
i've never felt so empty
fuck I feel so dry inside
drinking beers to fill me
pissing every twenty minutes
without getting off all filler
no climax
it didn't take me to that place of magic
where my brain is turned to mush
forgetting for a moment the death march i'm on
on a good whiskey day I get pissed
three sheets to the wind
crawling to my room
where I fall off the bed in the middle of the night
unlucky I didn't bash my skull and end it all
the pied piper calling to me
drink, swill get lost in another world
one where i'm not socially inept
a place where things make sense
somewhere I can forget
the pain that fillets my innards
tears at my being
I wake in the morning and sneak a drink
trying so hard to hide the fact that i'm drunk by ten am
slurring my words no one is fooled
the truth is I love being a drunk
it makes me feel alive
even with a slow death breathing down my neck
bottoms up, cheers and all that
today was a bad day
no oceans of whiskey to get lost in
i've never felt so empty
Published 18th Apr 2013
| Edited 21st Aug 2016
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18th Apr 2013 8:42am
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18th Apr 2013 9:36am
There is so much more to you Crim, I hope you have more good days and never give up.
Expressed and penned so well, you truly got the emotion across. :)
Expressed and penned so well, you truly got the emotion across. :)
26th Apr 2013 10:24pm
Anonymous
18th Apr 2013 11:08am
Such a sad and powerful write here Crim, a lovely pen of the darkness so many of us feel sometimes, much love
Peace, miki
Peace, miki
26th Apr 2013 10:25pm
Anonymous
18th Apr 2013 12:16pm
awesome write crim with stark emotion and reality!
strider
strider
26th Apr 2013 10:26pm
18th Apr 2013 6:46pm
Hard dark waves of emotion Dear Crim!!!
Your pen always flows with emotion!!!
Your pen always flows with emotion!!!
26th Apr 2013 10:26pm
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26th Apr 2013 10:28pm
thank you Noctem i'm only sorry you know this empty place lovely one..peace Crim
20th Apr 2013 5:12am
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22nd Apr 2013 11:09am
I'm so in love with this. The anger and the feeling of helplessness..drowning in the love/hate relationship that is alcohol. So tragic yet brilliantly penned. Much love miss crimson.
26th Apr 2013 10:29pm
