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In My Room
In my room
his touch
enlightens me
soothing fingers
reach into me
feeling my
muscular tube
In my room
he licks his lips
just to press
them on my
fleshy borders
spreading his tongue
along my folds
savoring how
I taste
In my room
stroking himself
in rhythm with
his tongue his
movements
are strong
In my room
our noise collides
together in
the center then
fills our ears
with every
stroke and lick
we express
our pleasure
seeking fulfillment
within each other
In my room
his touch
enlightens me
soothing fingers
reach into me
feeling my
muscular tube
In my room
he licks his lips
just to press
them on my
fleshy borders
spreading his tongue
along my folds
savoring how
I taste
In my room
stroking himself
in rhythm with
his tongue his
movements
are strong
In my room
our noise collides
together in
the center then
fills our ears
with every
stroke and lick
we express
our pleasure
seeking fulfillment
within each other
In my room
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Re: In My Room
17th Apr 2013 00:37am
Poetic, delicious, soft, hypnotic. Really like this one. P.S. your new profile pic is sexier than the last one!
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17th Apr 2013 00:48am
Re: In My Room
17th Apr 2013 1:02am
i like the way it was developed & brought out in a erotic but gentle way. Nice Work
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Re: In My Room
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 1:05am
lovely work tl
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Re: In My Room
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 3:54pm
tommielynn,
I like the warmth and tightness in your room! Enjoyed ; )
tornado
I like the warmth and tightness in your room! Enjoyed ; )
tornado

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