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Have You Tasted Hell?
Hanging onto the chair
as the world slips sideways and my words
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falling forever falling
where demons can't grasp
cloying for a soul that
is gorging on the vomit
from the foulest of natures
injected in my soul
a soul raped
defiled engorged by hell
engulfed in flames
withering, dying
crying out in pain
What does hell mean to you?
I've gotten a huge taste
it is like being sucked from
the inside out it tastes of pain.
as the world slips sideways and my words
S
l
u
r
r
r
falling forever falling
where demons can't grasp
cloying for a soul that
is gorging on the vomit
from the foulest of natures
injected in my soul
a soul raped
defiled engorged by hell
engulfed in flames
withering, dying
crying out in pain
What does hell mean to you?
I've gotten a huge taste
it is like being sucked from
the inside out it tastes of pain.
Published 17th Apr 2013
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17th Apr 2013 00:53am
Dark and hellish write indeed Crim!!!
Head up and on as best we can, tis all that can be done.
Excellent bleeding of ink!!!
Head up and on as best we can, tis all that can be done.
Excellent bleeding of ink!!!
18th Apr 2013 7:00am
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 1:05am
awesome write crim
strider
strider
18th Apr 2013 7:01am
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 2:49am
Crimsin:
Excellent poem
Well penned
Peace
Kitty
Excellent poem
Well penned
Peace
Kitty
18th Apr 2013 7:01am
17th Apr 2013 6:39am
Damn this piece hits hard. I like the slanted way you incorporated slur, it really adds to the effect. It's so haunting and personal I can't explain to you how much I love it.. Beautiful, soulful write darlin.
18th Apr 2013 7:02am
17th Apr 2013 11:51am
Haunting indeed, I remember my hell, fought the bastard with everything I had.
Powerful pen Crim, stay strong lovely lady. :)
Powerful pen Crim, stay strong lovely lady. :)
18th Apr 2013 7:03am
17th Apr 2013 3:22pm
Damn, this is powerful.
Strong piece, with an extra helping of darkness.
Well written, poet.
Strong piece, with an extra helping of darkness.
Well written, poet.
18th Apr 2013 7:03am
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 4:14pm
We all have our own personal hell's and some we share with others..I know this hell and you put it beautifully :-)
great write Crim xx peace
great write Crim xx peace
18th Apr 2013 7:04am
Thank you Miki..i'm only sorry you've experienced this hell..wishing you peace Crim
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