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She was the best ride I never had
From beginning to end she was smooth
Seeing the pinstripe across her long body
Wanting to finger it front to back
Opening her up to get a peek of her sweetness
All I could do was stare at her shiny parts
I was in love with this beautiful dream
One day I will make her my reality
She will be mine that 1987 Monte Carlo SS
From beginning to end she was smooth
Seeing the pinstripe across her long body
Wanting to finger it front to back
Opening her up to get a peek of her sweetness
All I could do was stare at her shiny parts
I was in love with this beautiful dream
One day I will make her my reality
She will be mine that 1987 Monte Carlo SS
Published 11th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 6:21pm
Loved this. The suggestive sleek lines of ones dream carrier. Thanks. Made me smile. I'm just about to get a 1963 lambretta perfect condition. Love her lines. Named her Mildred already so i totally get your enthusiasm. Even though when I googled the Monte Carlo its obviously very different. It's different courses for different horses but we all dream. Good luck with your lady
11th Apr 2013 6:45pm
Thank you synthetic1....
I've wanted a monte carlo for so very long!!Now I googled lambretta and had no idea it was a scooter...it's very cool!
I plan on naming mine Black Betty 2,I wish you luck with Mildred.And thanks for reading :)
I've wanted a monte carlo for so very long!!Now I googled lambretta and had no idea it was a scooter...it's very cool!
I plan on naming mine Black Betty 2,I wish you luck with Mildred.And thanks for reading :)
11th Apr 2013 6:57pm
I'll bet she even has that unmistakable fresh scent when you open her up and climb inside as her tatoos become wrapped around your mind... And when you turn her on, will she purrr and rumble with a roar when you make her motor race...? jj
11th Apr 2013 7:38pm
11th Apr 2013 7:45pm
I had to look the car up, it's three years before I was even born haha badass ride! I hope you can get it sooner than later! Nice writing as always, Tommie. Everyone has that one thing they really want, whether it's a dream car, dream guitar (me), dream house, love, sex, you name it. Whatever it is, you're passionate about it and devote a lot of time and maybe money too just to get it. This poem really illustrates that passion, I think it can resonate with anyone no matter what their thing is. Good work :)
11th Apr 2013 9:01pm
Wow...three years before you were born!It sure is a badass ride!And you're right, everyone has that certain something that they want!What kind of guitar do you want?
11th Apr 2013 9:08pm
Not sure which exact model but an Ibanez RG in white with a tremolo, the nicest model I can pull off so I can get serious about playing! I have played acoustic for years and I love it but I also love metal and the RG has been the shredder's choice for decades.
11th Apr 2013 9:17pm
My daughter has an Estabon acoustic g200 but she don't play...I wish she did!Her half brother plays bass but not sure what kind of guitar!The one you want is sick...very sharp looking guitar!I hope you get it! :)
Anonymous
11th Apr 2013 8:57pm
Beautiful tl
strider!
strider!
11th Apr 2013 9:03pm
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17th Apr 2013 10:59pm
There's just something about this car...I have to have one!!
Thank you glen ;)
Thank you glen ;)
