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myNextPoom,(pilfered from my own incoherent, tho poignant, communiques)
more will be revealed (or not) reg
arding how much less wee need,
then perhaps the cloak[s]
of our subjective,isolant reality[which]wee
chose for our images' protection[s]
can be dispensed with---
oh, tender/cruel
palpation[of]
palpitatings[for/of]an
exigence[?!] unto personified
misery-of-beinghuman ---
if you 'work it right', a
transcendence w'ill manifest,
[uh,perhaps],
though likely Not
in any form or sub'stance
that y'd preconceive it as.
( !Hi-ho, thee merry'o ! )......
chew on that a bit while I go dip myOwn
subjective reality in the
local toxi'laundromatic wash'hole
just one more time'fore thee
sweet chariot 'swings-low' for
that terminal pass[of] going gone I-be,
leavin only a light,fine dust of my brief
Night of Glowin Amour[s]
\\\
~~damn...a bit toomuch Brahms in this messy lil'room
thismoanin...how's 'bout some A.Ayler or
NakedCity? Ronettes?
(GrandGuignol?) ~~
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arding how much less wee need,
then perhaps the cloak[s]
of our subjective,isolant reality[which]wee
chose for our images' protection[s]
can be dispensed with---
oh, tender/cruel
palpation[of]
palpitatings[for/of]an
exigence[?!] unto personified
misery-of-beinghuman ---
if you 'work it right', a
transcendence w'ill manifest,
[uh,perhaps],
though likely Not
in any form or sub'stance
that y'd preconceive it as.
( !Hi-ho, thee merry'o ! )......
chew on that a bit while I go dip myOwn
subjective reality in the
local toxi'laundromatic wash'hole
just one more time'fore thee
sweet chariot 'swings-low' for
that terminal pass[of] going gone I-be,
leavin only a light,fine dust of my brief
Night of Glowin Amour[s]
\\\
~~damn...a bit toomuch Brahms in this messy lil'room
thismoanin...how's 'bout some A.Ayler or
NakedCity? Ronettes?
(GrandGuignol?) ~~
xxxccxxxxDKzk2013xxxxxbadpooms+badpfhotosXXXXXXXX
Published 11th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 4:14pm
11th Apr 2013 5:02pm
11th Apr 2013 5:53pm
Title of Poem "re:my next Poom" (I've not seen that done before) smiles...(pilfered from my own incoherent, tho poignant, communiques) is utterly charming.The remainder will take another 3 reads but...I'm liking it already . Praise to you.
11th Apr 2013 6:22pm
