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the Last Time
the last time I saw it
it was in the trunk of his car
and I thought to myself
"Now I can't create the unthinkable scar"
I look down at my wrist
covered by a button up shirt
I'm going to miss the bliss
the sting that overrides the hurt
he slams the trunk shut
and darkness consumes my last refuge
the refuge that feeds on blood sacrifice
and dark hearts that are addicted to self abuse
it was in the trunk of his car
and I thought to myself
"Now I can't create the unthinkable scar"
I look down at my wrist
covered by a button up shirt
I'm going to miss the bliss
the sting that overrides the hurt
he slams the trunk shut
and darkness consumes my last refuge
the refuge that feeds on blood sacrifice
and dark hearts that are addicted to self abuse
Published 11th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
11th Apr 2013 8:52am
Self abuse isn't addictive because of pain, it's the pleasure received from the chemical release and the mental surge too..best in my opinion not too avoid it by deprivation and think of it too much, dwelling. Best to substitute the bad with something more positive that can elicit the same feelings (such as exercise, but there are many options)
I love the write, clever and flows well..say's a lot. :-) write on!
I love the write, clever and flows well..say's a lot. :-) write on!
12th Apr 2013 3:43am
it is the pleasure from the chemical release. You are very right. There are many options and I'll try to write more often. Thanks.
