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Land of frozen
Draped by the Shadow of my sullen palace[/font] .
When the fierce waves hits the shore .[/font]
Shaken this land of frozen and misery .
No hopes for the unkbown future .
Only the darkness is the dead line .
Here only the darkest dreams prevails .
These darkest desires fill my soul .
Misery on blasphemous ruthless days .
Here no place for the weaknesses .
Coldness in love only darkest desires .
Burn my soul no places for weaker Gods .
Only Blackness is real no place for sun .
Dark clouds raises gather the winter .
Land of dreams destroyed and forgotten .
Touch my soul in echoes of melancholy .
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When the fierce waves hits the shore .[/font]
Shaken this land of frozen and misery .
No hopes for the unkbown future .
Only the darkness is the dead line .
Here only the darkest dreams prevails .
These darkest desires fill my soul .
Misery on blasphemous ruthless days .
Here no place for the weaknesses .
Coldness in love only darkest desires .
Burn my soul no places for weaker Gods .
Only Blackness is real no place for sun .
Dark clouds raises gather the winter .
Land of dreams destroyed and forgotten .
Touch my soul in echoes of melancholy .
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Published 4th Oct 2010
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4th Oct 2010 5:03am
your dreary image is depicted icily, with cold malice towards those not able to grasp hold of the frostbitten rigid concepts of this consciousness. Good imagery and portrayal of a complex state of being
4th Oct 2010 6:38pm
Bounded by the creepy hateful memories feel like a forsaken skyline , noone can unshackle me except the final day !
Differently from most poems of yours, here I see a rising creature of the dark,
(These darkest desires fill my soul .
Misery on blasphemous ruthless days .
Here no place for the weaknesses .)
and there's no better place for him rather than where's no sun , though in the end it all ends up in a deep sarcastic failure, cause after all it remains a "land of frozen".
(Land of dreams destroyed and forgotten .
Touch my soul in echoes of melancholy .)
;) well done
and come on, there's no such a thing of extreme content here :)
(These darkest desires fill my soul .
Misery on blasphemous ruthless days .
Here no place for the weaknesses .)
and there's no better place for him rather than where's no sun , though in the end it all ends up in a deep sarcastic failure, cause after all it remains a "land of frozen".
(Land of dreams destroyed and forgotten .
Touch my soul in echoes of melancholy .)
;) well done
and come on, there's no such a thing of extreme content here :)
4th Oct 2010 7:06pm
Feeling inside an anguishing sad plight . It looks like a perennial trial perforced by a phlegmatic case . Maybe plundered in one's essence !
4th Oct 2010 7:24pm
4th Oct 2010 8:53pm
4th Oct 2010 9:33pm
I love the repetition of 'dark' in different forms...it gives the whole piece this doomed incessant march-type beat. It's like a deep guttural voice coming out of black mountains.
