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On a Kiss
If true life and death be in the tongue
Tell me, by which am I stung
When that soothing needle slips
Between my trembling parted lips?
Published 9th Apr 2013
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9th Apr 2013 9:18pm
I really like this. Its got a nice flow, a straight rhyme, and the importance of this kiss, well, you really capture that anxiety. Thank you
Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 10:50pm
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