Adams Apple

Absolutely amazing! You've got range tommie! I envy that.

Oh lovegood.. :) .it's always nice to hear from you.. :) ..and how was your weekend? ;)

My weekend can best be described in the poem I wrote about the bathtub. (By the way, I changed the title; the original one was awful.) But if you want me to summarize: it was productive and quiet. Thanks for asking. How was YOUR weekend?

I'm glad you had a good weekend ;)
My weekend I spent with my sisters..we stayed up late and drank too much..it was wonderful!

That was awesome!  Amazingly vivid for its simplicity.  Great read!

Thank you ;-) I'm glad you liked it!

"Eve's orange" - that's a new one on me.

I named the poem Adams Apple...Eve's Orange is like the opposite ... just a funny little way to say  "in my throat "... ;)

Nice write tl....strider

I enjoyed writing this ...;-) Thank you Strider

You've done it again! Hot hot HOT! I read through again to pick out some favorite lines but I ended up reading the whole thing again. I really do love these sections though:

"...the softness of your tip, my lips rub that fat head, sucking, sliding along your vein..."

"...my dirty mouth wrapped around your gift like a bow..."

What a visual! I really liked the breaks of single descriptive words too, it turns up the heat majorly! I could almost feel this poem happening to me as I read it! Finally, I really thought the Adam's Apple/Eve's Orange thing was super clever! Loved this one! ;)

I thought the use of single words would be hot..:)
I'm just trying to keep everything spicy ...
thank you Deepest_Fantasy ;)

You succeeded...very spicy indeed ;)

very forceful and exciting good read

Thank you carig ;)

Damn...to agree wit @lovegood. u have range..this is a good write..

Thank you puppycrotch :)