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Confession
maybe this body is just
a shape
a form we take
that changes
through every life
that we live
so would it be such a sin,
when
i hurt myself
just to feel again
a shape
a form we take
that changes
through every life
that we live
so would it be such a sin,
when
i hurt myself
just to feel again
Published 6th Apr 2013
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6th Apr 2013 3:49pm
I can assure you, pain is something you will have an abundance of. To feel, i believe, is not necessarily to experience. To feel is to be effected. What effects you? Beauty? Truth? Only allow things that bring you joy to effect you. If suffering brings you gratitude, then be aware of suffering. But if it only brings you confusion, seek that which makes you full of light. Also, you are not alone in this seemingly never ending quest.
6th Apr 2013 8:56pm
17th Apr 2013 4:37am
Very powerful, self critique, I would definitely suggest going back and adding more to this piece, it has great potential to be an epic work. Keep it raw and questioning. Great write.
