Submissions by ThornWithin
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
Chirping of birds I shun; Forgotten meaning of fun; I twist and turn; And forever I will burn..
Tyr Alexander
ThornWithin
March 23, 2016
I was there when you were so fragile
Birth scabs and all you were so adorable
Though with headache and raging fever still I linger
Just to stay at your mama's side, to see you born
Never thought I am required a name to give you
I was a husband and never been a father all my life
They told me to name you after myself but I won't
Told myself to name you something unique, distinct
Fan of myths and lore, of triumphs and bravery
I quickly thought of a name you can be proud of
As the resident...
March 23, 2016
I was there when you were so fragile
Birth scabs and all you were so adorable
Though with headache and raging fever still I linger
Just to stay at your mama's side, to see you born
Never thought I am required a name to give you
I was a husband and never been a father all my life
They told me to name you after myself but I won't
Told myself to name you something unique, distinct
Fan of myths and lore, of triumphs and bravery
I quickly thought of a name you can be proud of
As the resident...
813 reads
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3rd Sex
ThornWithin
March 23, 2016
His swagger told everything
Though he denied all candid thing
His butt swaying, finger tossing did all the saying
He's a fruit.. I wonder if he's worth slicing
His ass beckoning as if wanting
Those eyebrows raised as if warning
Of future scenarios mind boggling
For a moment thought those tits were jiggling
Hesitating, I have to ask the ruffian
As to where those tits were made of
Thailand ? I asked. He answered "NO ! Russian !"
And before I can retort.. to the dark he darted...
March 23, 2016
His swagger told everything
Though he denied all candid thing
His butt swaying, finger tossing did all the saying
He's a fruit.. I wonder if he's worth slicing
His ass beckoning as if wanting
Those eyebrows raised as if warning
Of future scenarios mind boggling
For a moment thought those tits were jiggling
Hesitating, I have to ask the ruffian
As to where those tits were made of
Thailand ? I asked. He answered "NO ! Russian !"
And before I can retort.. to the dark he darted...
577 reads
1 Comment
Release
ThornWithin
March 19, 2016
Heavenly bitch, hellish itch
Protruding spot, engorged walnut
Dampened cavern, truncated rainforests
Eroded ravine, excessive mining.
35-E valley, inked and pierced belly
Desert skin, raining thighs
Lust waterfall, desire river
Moist volcano, tingling spring
Sweet sweats, earlobe love
Prune pair, torrid touches
Deep cave tour, contour pleasure
Rough texture, sensual rupture
Waist whirlwinds, tempestuous tempo
Delicious destruction, ravenous ritual ...
March 19, 2016
Heavenly bitch, hellish itch
Protruding spot, engorged walnut
Dampened cavern, truncated rainforests
Eroded ravine, excessive mining.
35-E valley, inked and pierced belly
Desert skin, raining thighs
Lust waterfall, desire river
Moist volcano, tingling spring
Sweet sweats, earlobe love
Prune pair, torrid touches
Deep cave tour, contour pleasure
Rough texture, sensual rupture
Waist whirlwinds, tempestuous tempo
Delicious destruction, ravenous ritual ...
630 reads
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Love Grabbed And Stabbed My Heart
(A Pantoum Poem)
This Piece is an entry for the Pantoum poetry contest Redundant Beauty
©ThornWithin
All Rights Reserved 2016
Love grabbed and stabbed my heart
Falsely accused, contempt for her building, and in silence brooding
Mindless mocking, quarrels and her unfounded womanizing woes neverending
Her feelings in frantic frenzy, furious and dramatic, our lives unfulfilling
Falsely accused, contempt for her building, and in silence brooding
A marriage marred,...
This Piece is an entry for the Pantoum poetry contest Redundant Beauty
©ThornWithin
All Rights Reserved 2016
Love grabbed and stabbed my heart
Falsely accused, contempt for her building, and in silence brooding
Mindless mocking, quarrels and her unfounded womanizing woes neverending
Her feelings in frantic frenzy, furious and dramatic, our lives unfulfilling
Falsely accused, contempt for her building, and in silence brooding
A marriage marred,...
743 reads
1 Comment
1-2-3-4-5 Poem
Licked
My wounds
It tasted funny
Neither sweet nor salty
Why oh my it's bitter !
Ask
What's better
A friend full
Of himself with bitterness
Or a friend who rationalized
Friend
Hearing himself
Alone mistaking deeds
Who decided won't listen
Than hearing friends who cared.
Betrayed
He said
Game playfully played
Never planned, we're done
Some things can't be undone.
Undone?
Let's condone.
Arguments never won
You are the one
Amuse...
My wounds
It tasted funny
Neither sweet nor salty
Why oh my it's bitter !
Ask
What's better
A friend full
Of himself with bitterness
Or a friend who rationalized
Friend
Hearing himself
Alone mistaking deeds
Who decided won't listen
Than hearing friends who cared.
Betrayed
He said
Game playfully played
Never planned, we're done
Some things can't be undone.
Undone?
Let's condone.
Arguments never won
You are the one
Amuse...
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Of Love and The Bees
Love is like a honey hive
From bee's busy buzzing dive
Gained with time, a thing unrushed
Aftertaste's a sky-high touch.
From bee's busy buzzing dive
Gained with time, a thing unrushed
Aftertaste's a sky-high touch.
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When My Cock Got Stuck
Was too damn dazed one night in the dark, my kidneys rumbled
Blundered and fumbled I nearly stumbled
In a dimmed alley I hurried as fast as my legs can carry
For I know all this will burst if I don't hurry.
Stepped on a cat, what a nuisance a fellow was that
For I nearly hurt myself when I slipped and fell on my butt
I peed a little and I laughed as if tickled
For I soiled myself as I felt the drops trickled.
Where that little menace went, though for a moment tranced
Stood up to regain my balance, that fall shook me up
Dizziness from earlier's...
Blundered and fumbled I nearly stumbled
In a dimmed alley I hurried as fast as my legs can carry
For I know all this will burst if I don't hurry.
Stepped on a cat, what a nuisance a fellow was that
For I nearly hurt myself when I slipped and fell on my butt
I peed a little and I laughed as if tickled
For I soiled myself as I felt the drops trickled.
Where that little menace went, though for a moment tranced
Stood up to regain my balance, that fall shook me up
Dizziness from earlier's...
705 reads
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Skinned Alive and Flayed
Thought highly of you .. you are uniquely special
Your opinions.. your perspective.. spatial
Your rational thinking stood out ..never bored
With you and I am humbled .. a trait I seldom afford
I've hurt you by disclosing a secret
A promise I broke yes I agree
Good intentions yes it will always be
My stand, a decision I won't regret
You won't ever lie so won't I
Be obliged to be treated the same
Would you rather me lie and put to shame ?
If being rational is just an option I'd rather die.
I always thought you're the...
Your opinions.. your perspective.. spatial
Your rational thinking stood out ..never bored
With you and I am humbled .. a trait I seldom afford
I've hurt you by disclosing a secret
A promise I broke yes I agree
Good intentions yes it will always be
My stand, a decision I won't regret
You won't ever lie so won't I
Be obliged to be treated the same
Would you rather me lie and put to shame ?
If being rational is just an option I'd rather die.
I always thought you're the...
773 reads
2 Comments
The Day I Attempted To Write an Erotic Poem
Can tit rhyme with slit ? or clit ?
Or use cock with suck ?
Make do with a simple fuck ?
Or make it teasing a little bit?
I found out I'm dumbfounded
What can possibly rhyme with nipple?
Should I be blunt or be subtle ?
I promised a poem or I'd be dead !
This dilemma's driving me to madness fits
Shit ! wits... shut up .. your spits
The words were never there not even here
Fuck I need a Merriam or a Webster !
I wish I could erase and never boasted
Backtrack my steps than end up being roasted ...
Or use cock with suck ?
Make do with a simple fuck ?
Or make it teasing a little bit?
I found out I'm dumbfounded
What can possibly rhyme with nipple?
Should I be blunt or be subtle ?
I promised a poem or I'd be dead !
This dilemma's driving me to madness fits
Shit ! wits... shut up .. your spits
The words were never there not even here
Fuck I need a Merriam or a Webster !
I wish I could erase and never boasted
Backtrack my steps than end up being roasted ...
706 reads
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I Pissed Outside My Window One Night
I pissed outside my window one night ... I saw so many cigarette butts cluttered
The night air.. the urge to end my life .. with a single jump
A single jump ..a wicked song in the background .. all it takes
A shot of whiskey? A friend saying don't?
Would burn you and say or think you shouldn't?
You'd die anyway .. with all that burnt out cigarettes cluttered
You saw in that half-opened window.. you never spent time.. outside that same window
In a house .. you never spent a dime making
Then spent all your life making a life and...
The night air.. the urge to end my life .. with a single jump
A single jump ..a wicked song in the background .. all it takes
A shot of whiskey? A friend saying don't?
Would burn you and say or think you shouldn't?
You'd die anyway .. with all that burnt out cigarettes cluttered
You saw in that half-opened window.. you never spent time.. outside that same window
In a house .. you never spent a dime making
Then spent all your life making a life and...
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Chatroom, Whiskey, and Her
Staring at this quarter-filled glass
Of whiskey and an almost emptied bottle
While I coughed out the smoke of cigarettes
That's been choking my lungs for twenty years
And then shifting my gaze at the PC monitor
To read the hearty and sometimes sarcastic
Chitchats of those chat room regulars
Something inside filled me with longing.
She's gone.. I let her go.. Whimsically
Out of sheer stupidity .. jealousy .. or drunkenness
Or all of the three combined.. Who knows
I bet she knew all along for she knows me
More...
Of whiskey and an almost emptied bottle
While I coughed out the smoke of cigarettes
That's been choking my lungs for twenty years
And then shifting my gaze at the PC monitor
To read the hearty and sometimes sarcastic
Chitchats of those chat room regulars
Something inside filled me with longing.
She's gone.. I let her go.. Whimsically
Out of sheer stupidity .. jealousy .. or drunkenness
Or all of the three combined.. Who knows
I bet she knew all along for she knows me
More...
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The Four Elements in Me
ThornWithin
All Rights Reserved 2016
(Poem inspired by the four elements and its role in my being. Written for the poetry competition titled Elements, submitted this 3rd day of March 2016 @dup.)
Diligence is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humility is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Kindness is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Temperance is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Improving skill is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humbling myself is the water...
All Rights Reserved 2016
(Poem inspired by the four elements and its role in my being. Written for the poetry competition titled Elements, submitted this 3rd day of March 2016 @dup.)
Diligence is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humility is the water that balances the fiery side of my being.
Kindness is the air that envelops my hearty disposition.
Temperance is the earth that strengthens the foundation of my resolve.
Improving skill is the fire that fuels my journey to success.
Humbling myself is the water...
1100 reads
5 Comments
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