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I need critiques
I don’t need validation or sympathy, I need help. I want to become a better poet. I really want other poets to tear apart my work and tell me what I need to do to improve.
I have a cognitive dysfunction that makes my memory recall extremely difficult both long term and short term. Writing is the only thing that helps but I want to get much better at it. Writing helps with the parts that are closed off and will be closed off. I’ve read a lot of poetry and respect everything that I see and I aspire to improve.
I put in my bio that I’m not giving up and I’m not. I do have a lot to say.
I’m just asking if you could stop by and help me out.
I have a cognitive dysfunction that makes my memory recall extremely difficult both long term and short term. Writing is the only thing that helps but I want to get much better at it. Writing helps with the parts that are closed off and will be closed off. I’ve read a lot of poetry and respect everything that I see and I aspire to improve.
I put in my bio that I’m not giving up and I’m not. I do have a lot to say.
I’m just asking if you could stop by and help me out.
Salutations
Salutations, I guess. I've gotten here googling "where to post written lyrics". Around August 2019, having had little to put my time into, being bored and somewhat into English, I started to rhyme. First portions written were pathetic, IMO. Then I was listening to some of Eminem's stuff and some other rap tunes. At some point I kicked off something that has been gradually growing in size and quality and seems like a pile of rap lyrics (not like today's ones being boastful and materialistic). Since that, besides the one mentioned, I wrote several poems/rhyming pieces.
Hello!
Hello, I'm new here. You can call me Haymi, or Hay. I was searching through the internet for motivational poems and I found myself here, and I'm glad I did. No one in my family and friends really appreciate poetry as much as I do, I think they don't get why words can be so beautiful and interesting to me, so finding this site is such a blessing. I really like poetry, written some myself but never read by anybody except me. I know I'm not yet as good, so I'd like to learn much from the other poetry, and be motivated to write.
NEW HERE!!!
Hey y’all!! I am new here! And a guy who came into my job actually recommended this website to me! Super excited to read so beautiful work! I am 21 and have been writing since I was 14 on and off! I partake in other coping mechanisms as well, but we all know writing gets the real shit off our chest. So I’m excited to share my work with y’all also!!
Hi everybody,
Glad to have found this community. I hope to share my writings with each of you here and look forward to digging my teeth into your works just as much.
To get started, reply with one of your favourite poems that YOU have written. I would love to read it.
Best of luck in all your creative endeavours.
Glad to have found this community. I hope to share my writings with each of you here and look forward to digging my teeth into your works just as much.
To get started, reply with one of your favourite poems that YOU have written. I would love to read it.
Best of luck in all your creative endeavours.