Hi everybody nice to meet u guys...not sure how to upload poems yet😂

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Hey Kyle
You know I love to see you smile
I haven't seen ya in too long
it's been a while

Hey Kyle
I hope your day's been great bro
i can't wait til your home
I don't want to wait no

Hey Kyle
you know mom really misses you
i know one day we'll get to do
all the things we didn't do

It's too soon I think
I'll leave a light on
in case you come home
i'll wait til all my times gone

it can't be real
it can't be real

feel's like a bad dream i can't wake from
I wanna wake up

why'd you have to go so soon
why?
please tell me Kyle
i'll always be your little brother
even when i grow older

34 is too young
and time stopped
im asking
why god

I keep asking
I keep asking

If i could only give you one more hug
just to say goodbye
i'd love it so much
i guess i'll only get it when I die

Why god?

nothing has ever felt so sick and twisted
i'm not sure you get it

that's my older brother
that's my big bro

you never got to have kids
you'll never get to meet mine
it's been so hard since you left
just trying to feel alright

you know i'm holding on for you Kyle
i'm holding on
i'm staying strong
even when it feels wrong

but please tell me why
if things happen for a reason
why is this required?

I feel so sick
i feel so sick and tired

Hey Kyle
I want to thank you so much
for all the lessons and the love
and now the guidance from above

I know that times were getting tough
i know you could've made it through
I know that life can get rough
we don't always know what to do

I wish I could've helped more
i'm sorry
I reached out and tried
now i reach out
and i cry

i'm so sick of asking why
what'll it change?
my stomachs in pain
I don't want to live with this fate


what can i do?


Hey Kyle
ya know i love you so much
and i'm so proud of you
I know you're looking down on me

please guide me toward the right path
cause at times I feel so bad
i know you'd understand
cause you always understood me

with all the depression
and the workplace hate
no dessert tastes great

but we've held on for way too long to break

everyone always loved you
everyone will always love you
and now you'll never be alone
you never had to be alone

just know you're with me in my spirit
please talk I want to hear it

I was so excited for our future together

will the lessons learned make up for time lost?
I keep asking why god?
I keep asking why god?

I'm glad I came upon this little poet's haven, pleased to meet you, I'm Thomas. Here is a new spoken word poem.

Thank you for taking the time to accept and receive me into your group. I'm trying to find more ways to expand my poetry and hopefully, I come across any inspiration to motivate me even more. I'm open-minded and I definitely appreciate any feedback (good or bad). I would love to see how well this new opportunity turns out.

Hey everyone; I am a new here looking for a safe place to openly share my content, in hopes for some constructive critiques.

Mama, I know you're not perfect but to me, you're the world's best. Your tears made me upset and it drove me to a destination they call success. Mama, you're always my Queen and never a Princess. Mama, your strength is undoubtedly the greatest, you protected me even though you were the weakest. Your smile is priceless and your humour is one of kind. My existence revolves around you. My only request is that we grow old together and comb each other hair until sunset. I love you, my bundle of strength.
Poetic_QueenWritten by Poetic_Queen

Hi I just joined. I’ve been writing quite a bit lately and I need someone to share with. Looking for feedback so I can improve :)

Hello everyone

Hey everyone, new here, but i have a bit of poetry id like to share. Ive been a writer since i can remember, and even write my own songs on guitar (although im not that great at singing). My style of writing is typically very abstract and dark.. which is my happy place. I hope you all enjoy what i have to share, and would love some feedback. Thanks!
Matt

Welcoming comments

breaths of madness angered Sonia
a beautiful soul of Mesaphotomia
droughts, famine and dementias
led these people to Euthanasia

I’m not sure what brought me here but I know that I have manifested sad attachments that only the love of my life has seen in broad daylight. It’s kind of haunting that today I finally understood what it means...I need to let it out because I can no longer bite the hand that feeds.. they say the queen of hearts is the best card, but I’ve become full of spades...things that happened in my life turned my ruby heart to a jade.

Just wrote my first poem and joined a poetry site for the first time. Looking forward to reading your poems and getting feedback on mines :)