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11th December 4:14pm
Knotacrook James Wallace
A little taste of my writing
Be careful choosing who to follow or who to lead. Fishing with cheap bait you never know who your going to feed. It's sweet at first glace but sour second time you look. What they didn't say was they weren't selling the bait it was the hook!
9th December 11:01pm
vglleo
The Empty Land of Wasted Stories
No more screaming, no more voices
In the empty land of wasted stories.
A place of madness and lost faith
But look at it the right way
And it’s astonishingly great.
A null tricky game, planned, well played,
You’d better keep watching before it vanishes anyway.
But perhaps it’s too late, in this blurry night
Maybe too early to see the bright light.
Just a second of hope, a last broken prayer
To remind you in this game, you were a good player.
Cause there are no winners
No losers, no glory
In the not too far land of wasted stories.
In the empty land of wasted stories.
A place of madness and lost faith
But look at it the right way
And it’s astonishingly great.
A null tricky game, planned, well played,
You’d better keep watching before it vanishes anyway.
But perhaps it’s too late, in this blurry night
Maybe too early to see the bright light.
Just a second of hope, a last broken prayer
To remind you in this game, you were a good player.
Cause there are no winners
No losers, no glory
In the not too far land of wasted stories.
Written by vglleo
This was my very first poem. I wrote it in my darkest moment and I feel like sharing it again.
7th December 6:35pm
BrandonBuckingham Brandon Buckingham
I can't find out where to post this poem and video
When i go to submit a poem I want to post it in the spoken word section but I cannot figure out how. This is the post I want to submit
follow link below to the visuals:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcrHTHH27J0
Lyrics:
I feel like a loser
I feel so stupid
no goals reached never reach conclusions
i'm like a fucking idiot
clueless but i'm living it
constantly giving in
bitching that i'm sick of it
why?
can't I ever finish shit I
always let opportunity pass me by
try as i might
still i lie in the night
with no sleep, zero sheep
in my eyes
Turn down the static
i'm a kratom addict
with a bad habit
the last cat to live lavish
and I rap fast, I rap slow
still get no
views, listens
who's dissing?
the list is only missing a few
shit add two
of the who's who
prove i lose
so i snooze
Yeah I said it,
i'm on reddit
straight feeling like a loser
on my computer and twitter
i figure my liver quivers
i've littered my brain
with killers of pain
delivered in vain
a loser the same
who's sober today
beginning to say,
i'll never win in this game
follow link below to the visuals:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcrHTHH27J0
Lyrics:
I feel like a loser
I feel so stupid
no goals reached never reach conclusions
i'm like a fucking idiot
clueless but i'm living it
constantly giving in
bitching that i'm sick of it
why?
can't I ever finish shit I
always let opportunity pass me by
try as i might
still i lie in the night
with no sleep, zero sheep
in my eyes
Turn down the static
i'm a kratom addict
with a bad habit
the last cat to live lavish
and I rap fast, I rap slow
still get no
views, listens
who's dissing?
the list is only missing a few
shit add two
of the who's who
prove i lose
so i snooze
Yeah I said it,
i'm on reddit
straight feeling like a loser
on my computer and twitter
i figure my liver quivers
i've littered my brain
with killers of pain
delivered in vain
a loser the same
who's sober today
beginning to say,
i'll never win in this game
Edited 5th December 9:10am
abigailwoods Abigail C. Woods
Aftermath
Four final words:
“You are not enough”
I am swallowing razor blades-
cutting out my own tongue;
destroying the evidence
Try to feel regret
One more exasperated sigh
One last trip to the ER
I am mopping up the puddles of
My own blood
Erase me
Try to feel regret
One last fake cry
One last lie hidden behind a devious smile
One last desperate ‘I love you’
attempting to conceal an abundance of
black and blue adorning virgin flesh like
rare jewelry
Stained skin; pain absorbed
Try to feel regret
One last passive aggressive fuck
One more defiant attempt to self destruct
One last breath let out with a quiver
One last time down on two
scraped and bloody knees
One last time
Swallowing razor blades
A.W.
“You are not enough”
I am swallowing razor blades-
cutting out my own tongue;
destroying the evidence
Try to feel regret
One more exasperated sigh
One last trip to the ER
I am mopping up the puddles of
My own blood
Erase me
Try to feel regret
One last fake cry
One last lie hidden behind a devious smile
One last desperate ‘I love you’
attempting to conceal an abundance of
black and blue adorning virgin flesh like
rare jewelry
Stained skin; pain absorbed
Try to feel regret
One last passive aggressive fuck
One more defiant attempt to self destruct
One last breath let out with a quiver
One last time down on two
scraped and bloody knees
One last time
Swallowing razor blades
A.W.
Written by abigailwoods
(Abigail C. Woods)
New/Poem critiques/making connections/improving skills
hey yall i just made this like 20 minutes ago but i feel like i could really utilize this as a tool for making connections with fellow writers while improving my writing skills as well! i have submitted two poems so far so i have to wait a bit before i can post anymore :/ BUT, i would love for you guys to check them out if you are interested and i will always reciprocate comments, likes, critiques, etc. let's do this! (i added my most recent poem feedback would be greatly appreciated and reciprocated!) thnx guys <3
