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28th November 5:04am
BrandonBuckingham Brandon Buckingham
Hey everyone I'm new to Deep Underground Poetry
I was wondering if I could get some eyes on my new spoken word piece? The link is below I would love some peoples opinions on the matter.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itlPwg4zRpE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itlPwg4zRpE
27th November 9:17pm
Sex_on_the_Joe Joe-D
I'm Back
Wassup my DUP FAMILY!!!!.... I'm sorry I've been gone so long. I needed some time to clear my head and cure my writers block since my last submissions. That short story I wrote Apple Pie put a toll on me that was unexpected.... It drained me of new perspective and insight that I had to get a little vacation from writing. But I'm back now and better than ever. Ready to reclaim my role as taking DUP by storm....
25th November 12:45pm
NuBorn BxckedbyGold
Teach me how to swim
Teach me how to swim
Sink me in
and pull me out
before I drown
Teach me how to swim
Quench my thirst
Let me drink from your well
Yet not to be full
So I can come back for more
Teach me how to swim
Paddle
Without a boat
Just a stick
And test the waters depth
Teach me how to swim
Fit as a bull
Half starved
Yet ready to sink again
Teach me how to swim
Or never mind, I just cummed
Best minute of my life
Sink me in
and pull me out
before I drown
Teach me how to swim
Quench my thirst
Let me drink from your well
Yet not to be full
So I can come back for more
Teach me how to swim
Paddle
Without a boat
Just a stick
And test the waters depth
Teach me how to swim
Fit as a bull
Half starved
Yet ready to sink again
Teach me how to swim
Or never mind, I just cummed
Best minute of my life
Written by NuBorn
(BxckedbyGold)
Teach me how to swim
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