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BrandonBuckingham
28th November 6:34am
BrandonBuckingham Brandon Buckingham
Another Piece I would like feedback on.
poetry 1625
This is a hip hoppy song but I would like feedback on the lyrics. I would love some opinions. The link is below. Thank you guys in advance, this site is awesome!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nYzJCWG64CM
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LadyPuck
28th November 5:46am
LadyPuck
Time to let some monsters out...
Oh and hello :)

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BrandonBuckingham
28th November 5:04am
BrandonBuckingham Brandon Buckingham
Hey everyone I'm new to Deep Underground Poetry
poetry 1623
I was wondering if I could get some eyes on my new spoken word piece? The link is below I would love some peoples opinions on the matter.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=itlPwg4zRpE
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Sex_on_the_Joe
27th November 9:17pm
Sex_on_the_Joe Joe-D
I'm Back
Wassup my DUP FAMILY!!!!.... I'm sorry I've been gone so long. I needed some time to clear my head and cure my writers block since my last submissions. That short story I wrote Apple Pie put a toll on me that was unexpected.... It drained me of new perspective and insight that I had to get a little vacation from writing. But I'm back now and better than ever. Ready to reclaim my role as taking DUP by storm....
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Anonymous
27th November 8:51pm
Anonymous
Just Arrived
Want to say something cute and dark and threatening so everybody can say "Hey, here's a new guy - we should really pay attention to his words." Fuck that. I am not up to it. Happy to find a twisted community. Hope to contribute.
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lueeisa
Edited 27th November 6:15pm
lueeisa
Hullo
poetry 1619
I'm a new member, love the old forum setup. How are y'all doing today?
I like to art as well as poem, maybe we can collaborate.

Also how do I add a profile pic?
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NuBorn
25th November 12:45pm
NuBorn BxckedbyGold

Teach me how to swim

Teach me how to swim
Sink me in
and pull me out
before I drown

Teach me how to swim
Quench my thirst
Let me drink from your well
Yet not to be full
So I can come back for more

Teach me how to swim
Paddle
Without a boat
Just a stick
And test the waters depth

Teach me how to swim
Fit as a bull
Half starved
Yet ready to sink again

Teach me how to swim

Or never mind, I just cummed
Best minute of my life
Written by NuBorn (BxckedbyGold)
Teach me how to swim
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Anonymous
25th November 00:29am
Anonymous
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Bent_not_Broken
24th November 4:33pm
Bent_not_Broken
I'm New!
Hello. Just joined today
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Cross_Greyman
24th November 10:14am
Cross_Greyman
New Guy
Hallo
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Anonymous
24th November 7:01am
Anonymous
Related submission no longer exists.
first entry
hey guys, check out my first poem here. i would like your honest criticisms. :))
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Anonymous
24th November 5:27am
Anonymous
Newbie
Hello 🙂
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