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arortiz73
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Fire of Insight
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Wh1skeySwagger
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arortiz73
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Wh1skeySwagger said:https://vm.tiktok.com/ZMJqEKAgr/
Wh1skey’s lil tea cup
That's really awesome!! <3
Wh1skey’s lil tea cup
That's really awesome!! <3
SweetKittyCat5
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Tyrant of Words
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Eve (Poem By I_IS_ME- (Remastered By SKC)
Does she intend to torture me, knowing her avatar is all it takes
I’ve regretted I_Is_Me again and again, but he refuses to be fake
I’ve wallow in the pain of being the one wrapped into her poetry
I silently scream please boo, please acknowledge, and forgive me
But we are so far into our future, please Boo can you also release me
Late nights spent praying that you, that you’d shine and show our destiny
Flowers springing from hillsides as we rolled back and forth wrapped in clovers
Sexual encounters with an intimacy swearing that I never knew you over and over
I knew that I was difficult, too many I_ Is_ Me was fucked up beyond repair
But baby the pain though always felt, was so much less with you there
Even at our most extreme, you pushed me to my mental and physical extreme
The tears and the mending, enticing and ripping us at our very seams
Can you understand my need possibly, my grasp for a version of our past
I reached for an apparition of a hand praying that it would last
Fragments of us hurling by, I clasped and bit at you again
Haha late night mental rendezvous of us basking in our sins
We are so sorry for each and everyone that you’ve lost and missed
But we are raw dawg in our life and death is how we live
We tried to live Marry Poppins style, but that was simply a fake version of us
She knows for me to exist her communication is a must
But with pain she neglects the very life force that I need
Our love a cautionary sign that I should heed
Times spent contemplating life and existence, while puffing on my weed
She’s so much more than my Eve, she’s my core, my very seed
Copyright©I_IS_ME 2020
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/I_IS_ME/
Another K Production
https://youtu.be/BY0q5lui_0g
Does she intend to torture me, knowing her avatar is all it takes
I’ve regretted I_Is_Me again and again, but he refuses to be fake
I’ve wallow in the pain of being the one wrapped into her poetry
I silently scream please boo, please acknowledge, and forgive me
But we are so far into our future, please Boo can you also release me
Late nights spent praying that you, that you’d shine and show our destiny
Flowers springing from hillsides as we rolled back and forth wrapped in clovers
Sexual encounters with an intimacy swearing that I never knew you over and over
I knew that I was difficult, too many I_ Is_ Me was fucked up beyond repair
But baby the pain though always felt, was so much less with you there
Even at our most extreme, you pushed me to my mental and physical extreme
The tears and the mending, enticing and ripping us at our very seams
Can you understand my need possibly, my grasp for a version of our past
I reached for an apparition of a hand praying that it would last
Fragments of us hurling by, I clasped and bit at you again
Haha late night mental rendezvous of us basking in our sins
We are so sorry for each and everyone that you’ve lost and missed
But we are raw dawg in our life and death is how we live
We tried to live Marry Poppins style, but that was simply a fake version of us
She knows for me to exist her communication is a must
But with pain she neglects the very life force that I need
Our love a cautionary sign that I should heed
Times spent contemplating life and existence, while puffing on my weed
She’s so much more than my Eve, she’s my core, my very seed
Copyright©I_IS_ME 2020
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/I_IS_ME/
Another K Production
https://youtu.be/BY0q5lui_0g
SweetKittyCat5
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 5th Sep 2018Forum Posts: 2077
You have a very beautiful craft my poet😊
SweetKittyCat5
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 5th Sep 2018Forum Posts: 2077
Much respect to your skill my poet, and very nicely composed😊
arortiz73
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 24th Sep 2013 Forum Posts: 298
Yes, I agree. Wh1skeySwagger is amazing!
SweetKittyCat5
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Tyrant of Words
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Wh1skeySwagger
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Swagger
Fire of Insight
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SweetKittyCat5 said:Much respect to your skill my poet, and very nicely composed😊
arortiz73 said:Yes, I agree. Wh1skeySwagger is amazing!
You both are too kind
I would however like to take this opportunity tell you guys how awesome you are and how thankful I am for you guys and blue keeping this thread alive through these busy times.
I do stop in and read what I can and am always in awe at the talent of the people that frequent this thread
SKC you are always so sensual and seductive as you prowl your way through stanzas
and arortiz73 welcome to the family brother
arortiz73 said:Yes, I agree. Wh1skeySwagger is amazing!
You both are too kind
I would however like to take this opportunity tell you guys how awesome you are and how thankful I am for you guys and blue keeping this thread alive through these busy times.
I do stop in and read what I can and am always in awe at the talent of the people that frequent this thread
SKC you are always so sensual and seductive as you prowl your way through stanzas
and arortiz73 welcome to the family brother
arortiz73
MTP
Forum Posts: 298
MTP
Fire of Insight
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SweetKittyCat5 said:
Yes, I totally agree, however, I was giving much credence to your spoken word art as wel; you guys do some amazing work and I feel enriched to be in such great poetic company.. please enjoy the remainder of your company as well
Oh. Thank you.
I don't even know now if BlueVelvete knows I edited and orated her work now, because she just blocked me. I guess things are getting sensitive around here again.
Sense of humors would be better, I think. Either way. Proof is in the above work. If anybody needs poetry work done, I'm free unlike poetikmediks. And my work is well... yeah. ;)
Yes, I totally agree, however, I was giving much credence to your spoken word art as wel; you guys do some amazing work and I feel enriched to be in such great poetic company.. please enjoy the remainder of your company as well
Oh. Thank you.
I don't even know now if BlueVelvete knows I edited and orated her work now, because she just blocked me. I guess things are getting sensitive around here again.
Sense of humors would be better, I think. Either way. Proof is in the above work. If anybody needs poetry work done, I'm free unlike poetikmediks. And my work is well... yeah. ;)
Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
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Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Wh1skeySwagger said:https://vm.tiktok.com/ZMJqEKAgr/
Wh1skey’s lil tea cup
Way to go brother
Incredible ❤️
Missed you
You hard working dog
Wh1skey’s lil tea cup
Way to go brother
Incredible ❤️
Missed you
You hard working dog