Which poem written by you is your favorite?
I like this one, one of my favorites if I must be vain.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/46601-killers-complex/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/46601-killers-complex/
violet said:I think so.... But i should give him the oppirtunity to remove it first. If not .. Well you know.
Why do i feel guilty? (eye roll)
must be because it was a total accident that he took two of your poems and posted them as his own on a site that you also occupy.
no you're right to feel guilty, it's not that he posted one of them here on this thread or anything...it's obviously nothing personal.
best thing to do is mother the cunt. that'll show him.
eh, my favorite right now would be this one, every time I write a new one it becomes my favorite, anybody else like that?
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/67173-once-in-a-blue-moon/
Why do i feel guilty? (eye roll)
must be because it was a total accident that he took two of your poems and posted them as his own on a site that you also occupy.
no you're right to feel guilty, it's not that he posted one of them here on this thread or anything...it's obviously nothing personal.
best thing to do is mother the cunt. that'll show him.
eh, my favorite right now would be this one, every time I write a new one it becomes my favorite, anybody else like that?
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/67173-once-in-a-blue-moon/
lepperochan said:[quote-128062-violet]I think so.... But i should give him the oppirtunity to remove it first. If not .. Well you know.
Why do i feel guilty? (eye roll)
must be because it was a total accident that he took two of your poems and posted them as his own on a site that you also occupy.
no you're right to feel guilty, it's not that he posted one of them here on this thread or anything...it's obviously nothing personal.
best thing to do is mother the cunt. that'll show him.
eh, my favorite right now would be this one, every time I write a new one it becomes my favorite, anybody else like that?
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/67173-once-in-a-blue-moon/
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I was waiting for you lol.
Why do i feel guilty? (eye roll)
must be because it was a total accident that he took two of your poems and posted them as his own on a site that you also occupy.
no you're right to feel guilty, it's not that he posted one of them here on this thread or anything...it's obviously nothing personal.
best thing to do is mother the cunt. that'll show him.
eh, my favorite right now would be this one, every time I write a new one it becomes my favorite, anybody else like that?
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/67173-once-in-a-blue-moon/
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I was waiting for you lol.
AlwaysCaliban said:[quote-127711-therefinedpoet]http://allpoetry.com/poem/9951463-Its_Duck_Season-by-The_Refined_Poet
Well, I don't have an account there, so I'll comment here. An interesting take on child-hood characters. Cynical and fresh. Good job.[/quote]
Thanks
Well, I don't have an account there, so I'll comment here. An interesting take on child-hood characters. Cynical and fresh. Good job.[/quote]
Thanks
Looking through them, I would have to say that "When You're Most Beautiful to Me" is my favorite thus far:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/62992-when-your-most-beautiful-to-me/
Expresses the deepest emotion, rings the most true, and has virtually no embellishment of events. I feel the love for my wife each and every time I read it ...
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/62992-when-your-most-beautiful-to-me/
Expresses the deepest emotion, rings the most true, and has virtually no embellishment of events. I feel the love for my wife each and every time I read it ...
