Poetry competition CLOSED 25th May 2017 2:01am
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I am temptation

Posted: 19th May 2017 7:10am
eswaller
eswaller
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Temptation and Sin In the Flesh

Darling, your eyes wink at me from across
The room. Temptation follows you around
With the sway of your hips. You are the boss
Of this city with danger that has drowned
Me alive. You and I both live it every night
When I want to be nothing more than
Tangled up with you when there is no light,
But complete darkness. All over again
I am falling for the plumpness of your
Lips and your soft curves I cannot take
My hands off of. I am begging for more.
Darling, I know that you can never fake
Real confidence like that as I watch you
Move across the room like a charming
Dancer, hypnotizing me like you always do.
With every smile you are disarming
And disrobing me. I feel stark naked under
Your gaze. Darling, you hit me right in
The heart like a quick rumble of thunder
And flash of lightening. You are walking sin.
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Posted: 19th May 2017 6:57pm
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 21st May 2017 1:11am
calamitygin
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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jj....i really loved both!
This is exciting

Posted: 21st May 2017 1:14am
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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you never dissapoint Amelia doll....like to peek in that brain of yours

Posted: 21st May 2017 1:15am
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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ES....this makes me want to read more of you....Thanks

Posted: 21st May 2017 6:17am
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 21st May 2017 7:28am
eswaller
eswaller
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Thank you so much. That means a lot to me.

Posted: 24th May 2017 4:49am
calamitygin
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jj I love reading your work...thanks so much

Posted: 25th May 2017 2:10am
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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I enjoyed and considered every one of these pieces...
In the end both ladies poems embodied temptation in such a unique and well thought out perspective. And beautiful to boot
....thanks and congrats to all

Posted: 25th May 2017 3:17am
Grace
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IDryad
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Congratulations AEMelia564!!...awesome...and yay Me...thank you Calamity for the honour.:) All the entries were awesome too.

Posted: 25th May 2017 7:46am
poet Anonymous
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