Poetry competition CLOSED 11th April 2016 3:47pm
WINNER
goldenmyst
goldenmyst
RUNNERS-UP:
LobodeSanPedro
and Jade-Pandora
In the opposite sex...
Taking a Break
(a sonnet)
My hand in rivers of our love lingers.
With every breathly move new proof emits,
With shudders brought beneath my soft fingers,
That with your hard you’d steal even my wits.
Though other lovers I was moved to sate,
By bringing forth with lips and tongue their want,
For your raw pulse and flow I cannot wait,
Your flavor mixed in dippings from my fount.
Our bitter drugs still linger in my throat,
And my soft hand on me will not relent.
My flowing love of you my fingers coat,
If so I’m left for days, I won’t repent.
Returned with food and drink for love, you slow,
And now, for you, my hand performs it’s show.
(a sonnet)
My hand in rivers of our love lingers.
With every breathly move new proof emits,
With shudders brought beneath my soft fingers,
That with your hard you’d steal even my wits.
Though other lovers I was moved to sate,
By bringing forth with lips and tongue their want,
For your raw pulse and flow I cannot wait,
Your flavor mixed in dippings from my fount.
Our bitter drugs still linger in my throat,
And my soft hand on me will not relent.
My flowing love of you my fingers coat,
If so I’m left for days, I won’t repent.
Returned with food and drink for love, you slow,
And now, for you, my hand performs it’s show.
Geoff...
This is really beautiful...
And you did a gorgeous job of making this voice femme...
This is very politely and daintily saying some very risque stuff!
Though other lovers I was moved to sate,
By bringing forth with lips and tongue their want,
For your raw pulse and flow I cannot wait,
Your flavor mixed in dippings from my fount.
I mean that is hot...
You have made wanton
And thirsty for him...
And classed it up kiddo..
Though i think sex is poetry...
In whatever voice if it comes from deep emotion and honest need and sensation...
In love with this sonnet..
And the sexiest poem in my memory
I have read of yours....
Thanks for classin up this bordello of verse we got us goin here....lol
But seriously
It does...
Very very nice...and yes...one of the best examples here of writing in the true voice of the opposite sex...
Thanks dollface!! Very much for enriching this comp...
This is really beautiful...
And you did a gorgeous job of making this voice femme...
This is very politely and daintily saying some very risque stuff!
Though other lovers I was moved to sate,
By bringing forth with lips and tongue their want,
For your raw pulse and flow I cannot wait,
Your flavor mixed in dippings from my fount.
I mean that is hot...
You have made wanton
And thirsty for him...
And classed it up kiddo..
Though i think sex is poetry...
In whatever voice if it comes from deep emotion and honest need and sensation...
In love with this sonnet..
And the sexiest poem in my memory
I have read of yours....
Thanks for classin up this bordello of verse we got us goin here....lol
But seriously
It does...
Very very nice...and yes...one of the best examples here of writing in the true voice of the opposite sex...
Thanks dollface!! Very much for enriching this comp...
calamitygin said:Geoff...
This is really beautiful...
And you did a gorgeous job of making this voice femme...
This is very politely and daintily saying some very risque stuff!
Though other lovers I was moved to sate,
By bringing forth with lips and tongue their want,
For your raw pulse and flow I cannot wait,
Your flavor mixed in dippings from my fount.
I mean that is hot...
You have made wanton
And thirsty for him...
And classed it up kiddo..
Though i think sex is poetry...
In whatever voice if it comes from deep emotion and honest need and sensation...
In love with this sonnet..
And the sexiest poem in my memory
I have read of yours....
Thanks for classin up this bordello of verse we got us goin here....lol
But seriously
It does...
Very very nice...and yes...one of the best examples here of writing in the true voice of the opposite sex...
Thanks dollface!! Very much for enriching this comp...
Wow, thanks Jen, for all your amazing thoughts... This poem was a gift... it just kind of appeared... sitting drinking my coffee at Starbucks...
I really appreciate your comments... I was a little unsure of the voice...
geoff
This is really beautiful...
And you did a gorgeous job of making this voice femme...
This is very politely and daintily saying some very risque stuff!
Though other lovers I was moved to sate,
By bringing forth with lips and tongue their want,
For your raw pulse and flow I cannot wait,
Your flavor mixed in dippings from my fount.
I mean that is hot...
You have made wanton
And thirsty for him...
And classed it up kiddo..
Though i think sex is poetry...
In whatever voice if it comes from deep emotion and honest need and sensation...
In love with this sonnet..
And the sexiest poem in my memory
I have read of yours....
Thanks for classin up this bordello of verse we got us goin here....lol
But seriously
It does...
Very very nice...and yes...one of the best examples here of writing in the true voice of the opposite sex...
Thanks dollface!! Very much for enriching this comp...
Wow, thanks Jen, for all your amazing thoughts... This poem was a gift... it just kind of appeared... sitting drinking my coffee at Starbucks...
I really appreciate your comments... I was a little unsure of the voice...
geoff
Love Affair
When he comes to my bed
My excitment reaches such a pitch
I hurriedly give him head
His penis I need to bewitch
When he is large and stiff
We're ready for deep insertion
On my back he takes a sniff
Enters ready for exertion
The missionary position we can trust
Inducing orgasms within seconds
I feel his length and thrust
Greatest pleasure so he reckons
Oh how I wish when we meet
Our relationship was more open
But we need to be discrete
Or the secret will be broken
When he comes to my bed
My excitment reaches such a pitch
I hurriedly give him head
His penis I need to bewitch
When he is large and stiff
We're ready for deep insertion
On my back he takes a sniff
Enters ready for exertion
The missionary position we can trust
Inducing orgasms within seconds
I feel his length and thrust
Greatest pleasure so he reckons
Oh how I wish when we meet
Our relationship was more open
But we need to be discrete
Or the secret will be broken
Perverse angel
My boss is looking at my well saved legs,
his eyes are in a stable line
staring at my tool to give birth to a child.
My mum warned me about that when I was young
I can still hear her saying
“Don’t color your lips,
don’t shave your legs,
don’t make up your face,
don’t wear short skirts!”,
What if he knew that there’s nothing more
than a hole inside my transparent skirt?
What if he knew that I prefer to go on my knees
in front of a glory hole
instead of having somebody filling my “this”.
I remember before I was born
I was inside my mother’s belly looking at her hole
maybe that’s why I like to be in the dark
waiting for a father’s dick to appear
and play hide and seek, what a great idea!
I wish I had wings instead of tits
I would open them and hide myself from my boss,
he would be scared and would quit smoking spliffs
what a disaster would be for him and many more
if I were a perverse angel
one of a kind, in front of a hole.
My boss is looking at my well saved legs,
his eyes are in a stable line
staring at my tool to give birth to a child.
My mum warned me about that when I was young
I can still hear her saying
“Don’t color your lips,
don’t shave your legs,
don’t make up your face,
don’t wear short skirts!”,
What if he knew that there’s nothing more
than a hole inside my transparent skirt?
What if he knew that I prefer to go on my knees
in front of a glory hole
instead of having somebody filling my “this”.
I remember before I was born
I was inside my mother’s belly looking at her hole
maybe that’s why I like to be in the dark
waiting for a father’s dick to appear
and play hide and seek, what a great idea!
I wish I had wings instead of tits
I would open them and hide myself from my boss,
he would be scared and would quit smoking spliffs
what a disaster would be for him and many more
if I were a perverse angel
one of a kind, in front of a hole.
Garden lover...
I love this piece...
It is a very fine, intense erotic piece..
Every verse is exciting and sexy..
Oh how I wish when we meet
Our relationship was more open
But we need to be discrete
Or the secret will be broken
Really nice end..
It read as if you are writing this as Man still in the "closet"..
And I do hear a mans voice..
I think you did a very good job at that..
The words bewitch and missionary take me out of that for just a second..
I am very impressed with the few that found a real voice of the opposite sex..
Without much reference..
Thank you very much for this sexy piece doll...
I love this piece...
It is a very fine, intense erotic piece..
Every verse is exciting and sexy..
Oh how I wish when we meet
Our relationship was more open
But we need to be discrete
Or the secret will be broken
Really nice end..
It read as if you are writing this as Man still in the "closet"..
And I do hear a mans voice..
I think you did a very good job at that..
The words bewitch and missionary take me out of that for just a second..
I am very impressed with the few that found a real voice of the opposite sex..
Without much reference..
Thank you very much for this sexy piece doll...
Art I swear to ...lol
You never fail to fully keep my attention..
I love your perverse..(see what i did there 😀)
I wish I had wings instead of tits
I don't know how many times a day i think this...lol
I remember before I was born
I was inside my mother’s belly looking at her hole
maybe that’s why I like to be in the dark
waiting for a father’s dick to appear
and play hide and seek, what a great idea!
Oh my God..lol
My God you are fun...you really took this and ran..you always do..and I love this about you..
Thank you always darlin...
You never fail to fully keep my attention..
I love your perverse..(see what i did there 😀)
I wish I had wings instead of tits
I don't know how many times a day i think this...lol
I remember before I was born
I was inside my mother’s belly looking at her hole
maybe that’s why I like to be in the dark
waiting for a father’s dick to appear
and play hide and seek, what a great idea!
Oh my God..lol
My God you are fun...you really took this and ran..you always do..and I love this about you..
Thank you always darlin...
I had 2 other skilled poets read these and I am waiting for them to give me their scores...I have people close to me in this comp...so I wanted to make sure the winner would be chosen without bias...they are non DU members...
I will have the trophy awarded within the hour!
Thanks for waiting...and thanks for all the incredible entries...
I will have the trophy awarded within the hour!
Thanks for waiting...and thanks for all the incredible entries...
These were incredibly close...
By point system we chose a top 5..
Hep and Trix were in there with the 3 chosen...and then..
3 people picked their top 3 out of those ..
Goldenmyst congradulations...I am tickled to give you this trophy..It was a beautiful piece and the poets I had help were amazed this was written by a man...
Lobo your first piece was the one chosen...everyone thought it was a very well written, tight poem..you caught this character perfectly..
Jade..
The Flame piece was the one chosen..
We all thought you did a wonderful job catching the masculine voice without strong references...and it was just a very captivating poem..
Thanks to everyone...Every piece here was just fantastic...I am so grateful for all of them...
By point system we chose a top 5..
Hep and Trix were in there with the 3 chosen...and then..
3 people picked their top 3 out of those ..
Goldenmyst congradulations...I am tickled to give you this trophy..It was a beautiful piece and the poets I had help were amazed this was written by a man...
Lobo your first piece was the one chosen...everyone thought it was a very well written, tight poem..you caught this character perfectly..
Jade..
The Flame piece was the one chosen..
We all thought you did a wonderful job catching the masculine voice without strong references...and it was just a very captivating poem..
Thanks to everyone...Every piece here was just fantastic...I am so grateful for all of them...
! Congrats for the choices, well deserved! 
Jen thank you so much. I am honored. Writing from a woman's perspective has been my passion for nearly two decades. From stories to poems I love writing like that. I appreciate very much the recognition that my work is convincing as a woman. Thank you so much my love and the other judges. It means the world to me. 
John
John
Omgosh, I got a good night's sleep (rare!), got here a few minutes ago, and found out about this via someone's pm...
and Jen! I couldn't be more pleased or grateful at the results... you and the two judges did a great job...
And you! Doing a competition with this kind of theme, terrific, and more of a challenge than meets the eye & pen, which was a good thing. A comp that makes a poet think as the other gender, and not roll out just anything.
Now then, congratulations to John (goldenmyst) for what truly was a beautiful write in a feminine demeanor as well. His piece was well written, and deserving of the cup!
To Lobo's piece that placed: the craft, the pace, the imagery, drew me in throughout with its compelling nature... congratulations!
And Jen, thank you for the opportunity. and for the honor of "Flame" as a runner-up. And to all who participated, everyone did amazing ink!
Until next time!
--Jade💟
and Jen! I couldn't be more pleased or grateful at the results... you and the two judges did a great job...
And you! Doing a competition with this kind of theme, terrific, and more of a challenge than meets the eye & pen, which was a good thing. A comp that makes a poet think as the other gender, and not roll out just anything.
Now then, congratulations to John (goldenmyst) for what truly was a beautiful write in a feminine demeanor as well. His piece was well written, and deserving of the cup!
To Lobo's piece that placed: the craft, the pace, the imagery, drew me in throughout with its compelling nature... congratulations!
And Jen, thank you for the opportunity. and for the honor of "Flame" as a runner-up. And to all who participated, everyone did amazing ink!
Until next time!
--Jade💟
