Spring/Summer haiku
LobodeSanPedro
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Poetry Contest Description
Write a traditional haiku about the spring or summer
Haiku
noun, plural haiku for 2.
1. a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.
2. a poem written in this form.
The poem must be nature based on spring or summer, and adhere to a traditional 5 -7 - 5 syllable count ...
New writes but I'll accept poems posted since April 2015 on DUP. If it's previously posted please provide the link as well.
Haiku don't traditionally have titles, so one is not necessary here.
Up to three posts, but I'm really just looking for that one piece that makes me wish I'd written it.
NO SENRYU (pieces on human emotions or experiences ... There's a separate competition for that).
PM me if you'd care to help judge.
Salud
noun, plural haiku for 2.
1. a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.
2. a poem written in this form.
The poem must be nature based on spring or summer, and adhere to a traditional 5 -7 - 5 syllable count ...
New writes but I'll accept poems posted since April 2015 on DUP. If it's previously posted please provide the link as well.
Haiku don't traditionally have titles, so one is not necessary here.
Up to three posts, but I'm really just looking for that one piece that makes me wish I'd written it.
NO SENRYU (pieces on human emotions or experiences ... There's a separate competition for that).
PM me if you'd care to help judge.
Salud
souladareatease
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Tyrant of Words
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Sweat upon a breeze
heavens opulent tears, drape
everything sung
heavens opulent tears, drape
everything sung
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Thank you for the first of what I'm sure will be three great entries, souladareatease
Arbasyn
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Twisted Dreamer
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Cycle
Swaying hammock swings,
The sun's pendulum rotates
On the slightest breeze.
Swaying hammock swings,
The sun's pendulum rotates
On the slightest breeze.
MagicVisionz
Cortez Love Matrice
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Cortez Love Matrice
Fire of Insight
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Joined 3rd July 2015 Forum Posts: 51
The Earth wakes from sleep
Blooming freely in beauty
Sharing natures’ spring
Blooming freely in beauty
Sharing natures’ spring
Anonymous
The buds are bursting
Leaves explode in verdant fire
Birds are nesting now
Leaves explode in verdant fire
Birds are nesting now
Anonymous
A clear cloudless sky
The Sun is at its zenith
Solar cells do well
The Sun is at its zenith
Solar cells do well
Anonymous
There was too much Sun
I got a melanoma
Now I have a scar
I got a melanoma
Now I have a scar
Anonymous
The beautifull garden spreads scents and euphemisms,
The bugs leech from the very sensible point of the flower,
The garden must be burnt in a beautifull pain.
The bugs leech from the very sensible point of the flower,
The garden must be burnt in a beautifull pain.
MagicVisionz
Cortez Love Matrice
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Cortez Love Matrice
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 3rd July 2015 Forum Posts: 51
Walking on the beach
Enjoying the summers’ heat
Sipping lemonade
Enjoying the summers’ heat
Sipping lemonade
Anonymous
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jemac
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 25th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 237
plants push through the earth
vibrant flowers permeate
the fields with color
vibrant flowers permeate
the fields with color