Frustration
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Beniah
Joined 12th May 2015
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Lost Thinker
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ya, straight to the point. same applies to the male gender as well
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summultima
uma
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uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1381
plastcized timbres
doesnt look like
she enacts her meaty role
in excusable oriental reservations
of a feminine timidity
that's a theatrical turn on
but mostly doesn't hold in reality
and, not well within scope of scripts
doesnt also seem to carry
spellbinding gorgeous elegance
this so lead female
in no clear demarcation
between an expressionless mannequin
and a cosmetic robot in unartistic cuts
of plastic linearity
and nil chemistry
a total spoil
for this complex role
that flies sky-pitch high
in a breakthrough hybrid note:
improvisational western ecstatic streaks
tucking in as suddensoft seductive edges
over a plaintive classical composition
when what audience need
is a futuristic Jhansi Ki Rani
in an outlandish romantic battlefield
tuning in 'straight-winner' temperamental timbres
her hapless display:
unwittingly reveals her Hyde out
in hipless hopeless moves
doesnt look like
she enacts her meaty role
in excusable oriental reservations
of a feminine timidity
that's a theatrical turn on
but mostly doesn't hold in reality
and, not well within scope of scripts
doesnt also seem to carry
spellbinding gorgeous elegance
this so lead female
in no clear demarcation
between an expressionless mannequin
and a cosmetic robot in unartistic cuts
of plastic linearity
and nil chemistry
a total spoil
for this complex role
that flies sky-pitch high
in a breakthrough hybrid note:
improvisational western ecstatic streaks
tucking in as suddensoft seductive edges
over a plaintive classical composition
when what audience need
is a futuristic Jhansi Ki Rani
in an outlandish romantic battlefield
tuning in 'straight-winner' temperamental timbres
her hapless display:
unwittingly reveals her Hyde out
in hipless hopeless moves
DevilsChild
Forum Posts: 120
Tyrant of Words
8
Joined 10th Dec 2014Forum Posts: 120
Congratulations to cunnias! Great heart in your poem ^^
Also the runner ups were great reads
SwampEyes
BoFantastic
Thanks to all who posted a poem. It's great to view the minds of such talents ^^
Also the runner ups were great reads
SwampEyes
BoFantastic
Thanks to all who posted a poem. It's great to view the minds of such talents ^^
Fetchitnow
Forum Posts: 156
Thought Provoker
2
Joined 20th Apr 2015 Forum Posts: 156
Well done guys and gals
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Great comp! Congrats to all! Thanks DevilsChild!