Poetry competition CLOSED 13th May 2015 00:26am
WINNER
cunnias
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RUNNERS-UP: BoFantastic and SwampEyes

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Frustration

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Beniah
Lost Thinker
Zimbabwe
Joined 12th May 2015
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ya, straight to the point. same applies to the male gender as well

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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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plastcized timbres


doesnt look like
she enacts her meaty role
in excusable oriental reservations
of a feminine timidity
that's a theatrical turn on
but mostly doesn't hold  in reality
and, not well within scope of scripts  

doesnt also seem to carry
spellbinding gorgeous elegance
this so lead female
in no clear demarcation
between an expressionless mannequin
and a cosmetic robot in unartistic cuts
of plastic linearity
and nil chemistry

a total spoil
for this complex role
that flies sky-pitch high
in a breakthrough hybrid note:
improvisational western ecstatic streaks
tucking in as suddensoft seductive edges
over a plaintive classical composition


when what audience need
is a futuristic Jhansi Ki Rani
in an outlandish romantic battlefield
tuning in 'straight-winner' temperamental timbres
her hapless display:
unwittingly reveals her Hyde out
in hipless hopeless moves




DevilsChild
Tyrant of Words
United States 8awards
Joined 10th Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 120

Congratulations to cunnias! Great heart in your poem ^^

Also the runner ups were great reads
SwampEyes
BoFantastic


Thanks to all who posted a poem. It's great to view the minds of such talents ^^

Fetchitnow
Thought Provoker
2awards
Joined 20th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 156

Well done guys and gals

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

Great comp! Congrats to all! Thanks DevilsChild!

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