Sweat n Smoke
summultima
uma
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uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1365
Poetry Contest Description
something dark preferably but not erotic. micropoetry tym again
micropoetry challenge.. as the title smells, expecting dark themes preferably (sunshine-soft sweats n smokes too r highly welcum though), but stritcly no erotic.
n the simple rules r
max 3 entries per poet
word limit per poem: 31 words or less
any format
new writes of course
title optional (not counted as part of 31, but don't have a lengthy running one i had noticed in few dup poems plz)
winner to be based on the intensity of content build upon n the overall poetic feel
juz a week's tym..rush in the sweaty notez n smoky atmospheres dear poetz. do pm if any doubts on rules. Cheerz!:)
n the simple rules r
max 3 entries per poet
word limit per poem: 31 words or less
any format
new writes of course
title optional (not counted as part of 31, but don't have a lengthy running one i had noticed in few dup poems plz)
winner to be based on the intensity of content build upon n the overall poetic feel
juz a week's tym..rush in the sweaty notez n smoky atmospheres dear poetz. do pm if any doubts on rules. Cheerz!:)
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
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Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14571
bleed your sins unto my hands
so I can smear my face with them
contrition be damned:
there are no innocents here
not in this place
Anonymous
Spasm
palms wring blood
from smoking eyes red horse flies rise
hairy with ill ticks
burning clock sweats bullets
Sharp, dark tic on cavernous face
bit lip horror
chase breath to death.
palms wring blood
from smoking eyes red horse flies rise
hairy with ill ticks
burning clock sweats bullets
Sharp, dark tic on cavernous face
bit lip horror
chase breath to death.
Anonymous
Cut from the wreckage
The anniversary looms
The day that taught me
Anything can happen
When I got in the car
And woke up changed
Forever
Days away from my annual meltdow
Remembering
Trembling
The anniversary looms
The day that taught me
Anything can happen
When I got in the car
And woke up changed
Forever
Days away from my annual meltdow
Remembering
Trembling
summultima
uma
Forum Posts: 1365
uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1365
Tq Craic fr kicking off this comp with dat meaningful spatial entry .
Hollydove, that was really sweaty n smoking dark. N tq fr reminding abt title.will include in de rules:)
Miki, that was a moving piece n well titled,tq
Keep them coming more dear poetz
Hollydove, that was really sweaty n smoking dark. N tq fr reminding abt title.will include in de rules:)
Miki, that was a moving piece n well titled,tq
Keep them coming more dear poetz
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
backpack
blood trickled from the porcelain doll's eyes
the glass case broken around her
reflects the passive sun
Boy Scout trick
fire without the match
the devil said one word before
boom!
blood trickled from the porcelain doll's eyes
the glass case broken around her
reflects the passive sun
Boy Scout trick
fire without the match
the devil said one word before
boom!
Ealantair
Joined 16th July 2014
Forum Posts: 12
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 12
Palm strokes own neck
Pensively,
Testing resistance,
Tempting elasticity
Of skin.
Now push.
A tug of war
Etched deep inside…
Those late night thoughts.
summultima
uma
Forum Posts: 1365
uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1365
Tq LSP n Ealantair..hotfuming bloody reads!
[n to a more steady LSP, that was an accurate 31, means no disqualifications dis tym:)]
Keep them coming more dear poetzz..
[n to a more steady LSP, that was an accurate 31, means no disqualifications dis tym:)]
Keep them coming more dear poetzz..
David_Macleod
14397816
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14397816
Tyrant of Words
39
Joined 5th Nov 2014Forum Posts: 2983
Sweat and Smoke
Your heat makes me sweat
The smoke from the fire I set
Was me trying to save you.
With my sweat I will cleanse your bones
Your charred and blackened bones
Your heat makes me sweat
The smoke from the fire I set
Was me trying to save you.
With my sweat I will cleanse your bones
Your charred and blackened bones
David_Macleod
14397816
Forum Posts: 2983
14397816
Tyrant of Words
39
Joined 5th Nov 2014Forum Posts: 2983
Smoking Sweaty
I got sweaty at the gym today
In order for me to get fit
I finished my second pack of cigarettes
All my efforts just went to shit
I got sweaty at the gym today
In order for me to get fit
I finished my second pack of cigarettes
All my efforts just went to shit
Anonymous
Morphine
There's a dull ache
throbbing
sharp stabbing pain
piercing
my face swollen
jaw bone in agony
excruciating
overwhelmed with toothache
dentist a day away
morphine I love you
Carpe_Noctem
Forum Posts: 3039
Tyrant of Words
8
Joined 3rd Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3039
Snow and rain
its all the same
like war and peace
the ground swells with blood soaked tears
freedom to choose
coke or Pepsi
its all the same
in this world run on greed
ruled by corporate democracy
Anonymous
[center]Under Devil's cloak of smoke
Ash white faces appear
streak with tears
Stairwells spiral down into madness
Hearts sweat grief
fiercely in final fight
Over three hundred storm gates of hell
[/center]
Ghoulie
Just G
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Just G
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 20th Oct 2012Forum Posts: 920
[Cremation]
memories remain
like raining ash
that clings to rose-tinted glasses
obfuscating nostalgic embers
with the grimey shadow of hindsight
whilst a remaining spark
is snuffed
exiled to nihility
toniscales
Lost Girl
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Lost Girl
Fire of Insight
36
Joined 16th Dec 2014 Forum Posts: 431
Baby Jar
I leave
my feet go heavily
breath transformed
into the most pallid
of miracles
I enter the room
some hours later
you are fermenting
caving in
giant fig overripe
with sadness
I leave
my feet go heavily
breath transformed
into the most pallid
of miracles
I enter the room
some hours later
you are fermenting
caving in
giant fig overripe
with sadness