baby born in a box
toniscales
Lost Girl
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Joined 16th Dec 2014
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Lost Girl
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 435
Let Me Back in the Box
(There is no peace like that of darkness...)
I was born in a box,
a shadowless interior,
starved for stimulation,
devoid of any comfort the senses
might bring.
From the golden arc of the perambulator
I learned to grope, to see, to hear.
In a world of infant terror, the senses
were my only companions. Never did I know
that tomb of darkness was craving to
follow me, bury me in once more.
Now, at forty, I have grown tired of
the feeble light which filters through
dirty windows and the innate sadness
of doorways. The songs repeated relentlessly
in my head sadden me. I remember the sweetness of
your touch, that silk on satin, something
forever denied to me now.
I yearn to be back in that black box
again, to be swathed in the ebon swaddling
of solitude. To enfold myself in that blanket
of unwinking stars, be rid of these
painful faculties, an unstirring, lovely
corpse, those bitter instruments that
only render you more vividly in my mind.
(There is no peace like that of darkness...)
I was born in a box,
a shadowless interior,
starved for stimulation,
devoid of any comfort the senses
might bring.
From the golden arc of the perambulator
I learned to grope, to see, to hear.
In a world of infant terror, the senses
were my only companions. Never did I know
that tomb of darkness was craving to
follow me, bury me in once more.
Now, at forty, I have grown tired of
the feeble light which filters through
dirty windows and the innate sadness
of doorways. The songs repeated relentlessly
in my head sadden me. I remember the sweetness of
your touch, that silk on satin, something
forever denied to me now.
I yearn to be back in that black box
again, to be swathed in the ebon swaddling
of solitude. To enfold myself in that blanket
of unwinking stars, be rid of these
painful faculties, an unstirring, lovely
corpse, those bitter instruments that
only render you more vividly in my mind.
case28
Alexander Case
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Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 16th June 2013
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johnrot
Forum Posts: 3645
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 10th Oct 2012
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congrats ladies and thank you.....
these ladies demonstrated the best description of sense of things without physical senses.
awesome job everyone.
thanx for playin..........
these ladies demonstrated the best description of sense of things without physical senses.
awesome job everyone.
thanx for playin..........
summultima
uma
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1409
uma
Dangerous Mind


Forum Posts: 1409
Thank you John fr such a challenging comp!
(never thot wud win, but must say your lot of curious questions asked within the comp. to be addressed gave a lucid rigour to write on in metaphysical realms)
Congratz Le Fay n everyone who entered for stretching as per the theme. Grt reads, tq.
(never thot wud win, but must say your lot of curious questions asked within the comp. to be addressed gave a lucid rigour to write on in metaphysical realms)
Congratz Le Fay n everyone who entered for stretching as per the theme. Grt reads, tq.

John,thanks for a great comp....
cONGRATS to Uma,
queen of words
honored to be mentioned.....
cONGRATS to Uma,
queen of words
honored to be mentioned.....