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FREESTYLE BATTLE RAP COMPETITION

druidicheirophant
AVARIS DEMALO
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 27th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 194

austin rura
u dont wanna know what i see in ya aura
make a long story shorter
in this battle no tomorow
if even this thread was endless
il b the last head and contestant
tht will have to bash your head in
im a ruthless henchman
leave all your brethren in red ink
coming up against me
use ur head niga think
im a archfiend bro
you a low life latino
im swarthy and shadowy as crows
beware cause i cant reap what i sow
i creep with the foes
im deep in the cruise
your jeeps in the snow
you got a cursed purpose
up against this word merchant
we def opposites
its obvious
im a walking
talking
apocalypse
that can shred u to composites
leave u chopped to bits
pissing down ur esophagus
im a fire spitting metroplis eatin up ur oxygen
kick up thenotch again so when i rock a pen
words disperse and make good people go slaughter men
anyone that aint my friend
if you think this beef is pretent
il leave this imposter dead
and cleave off his head
with the rusty edge




Panter896
Thought Provoker
Jamaica 1awards
Joined 26th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 34

Mileto
You skipped over me like a little hoe
You an X man- battling magneto
This will not equal a sequel
Slaughtering you for the people
You weak with the flow,
Saw that pages ago,
No food for thought,
You dudes feeding me ego.
I spit a flow with a lil violence,
You lil bytches respond with silence.
This ain't a battle
this walk in the park
I'm use to swimming with sharks in the dark
So go ahead and start something
While I spark something
Waiting for a response
But you ain't got nothing
You ain't ready for war
You are what you are
Stop fronting
You got cards,
But you keep bluffing
I use this beef
For thanksgiving stuffing
These bars as lite as you
So go ahead make a move
I battle both of you, while watching the news in church shoes
While I set the mood, open casket for the family to view
You slept on me; now you're sleeping too
eye for an eye, and I, follow the rules
Turning this merchant into a see urchin
Austin - next I'm coming for you
About to make you my boo



druidicheirophant
AVARIS DEMALO
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 27th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 194

yo panter chill out n watch ya temper
im a satanic tempter your a failure
im from where theres holy angels
ur trapped in the underworlds entangled
im in occult circles chanting
your watchin cartoons laughing
im a serpent priest from the middle east
im in cahoots with beasts
ur gona get a defeat with ease
and from xmen im sabertooth
im a barbarian black magician
and i already invaded ur youth
my words cant be evaded or soothed
you eitha get degraded or slayed u choose
you pray to misguided fools
i got mad spiritual jewels
and i aint need no gurus
im wit apes wit clubs
your in the wood wit a tutu
i send black auras in battles
fill u up with horrors of alien chatter
program you with malicious data
right onto your mental hardrive
dont mean to be harsh fettered bard but this a hard life
all you fiendin lesser heathens
easily casted to the nether regions
have yo ass hurled
qi negatively swirled
to be appointed by the overlords of the underworlds
avaricious dark and feigned in reality
earthly spheres ruled by phantoms that reign in principalities
beware jst sent emissaries to ur lair
we crews of bent hebrews
try n offer ur dog up niga we want you
yo bitch ass b flattened
u dont wanna know wht happened
i got beef with dragons
this creep be prancin
kickin his legs around while i lance them
im n evil priest entranced in khem
u need to be rewired so u cool
u in fire pits of dead kids and shit n u drool
im a fire purified soul these words directed to you
poisonous wealth n dominion im infected like jews
your shitty diss
i aint havin it
board the mothership
hoverin around ur world mad as shit
chemtrailin yo nation aint yo day in this age of abrasion
warnin u from my martian station
not expectin a answer
landed u in a wooded area surrouned by lancers
ur a ballet dancer
im bent and rayless
relentless
possessed by fallen angel races
after this diss
ill giv u a tour on how morbid this place is
fogs of undead consuming all it reaches
leave u in subsurface vaults with creatures covered in leeches
i take drugs wit syringes
awaiting rebirth in a coffin
check my demonic features
im morphin
shapeshifting and coughing
bong hitting my existence is a eerie vision im lost in
im aimin at ur village
like last victims easily pillaged
we travel bent and blitted

poet Anonymous

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Panter896
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 34

Imma killa artist
I’ll kill’em all wit witts
Mixed wit Lyrics
and twist
Taylored swift
for these nimb witz
I spit stupit dump quick slick shit
You say tan nick, I say tan nic
I sat on it, like Saint Tan Nick
I ain’t a saint, or a snake serpent
You look more like tan nick
Or a fat and ugly Saint Pat trick
you silly rabbit
dixx are for chic
So stop being a dick
My gang green; I'm that sick
You flow like an alien from a different planet
So I capted and planned it
Then left you a-band-did
Hanging all strained
With Caps-locked in
I couldn't have plan it
The way fate planned it
Headed for the top
Like an alien from another planet
You drinkin ale-he-on a comet
Cause you over commit like a hobbit
you haling ions from aliens
with Plannets and Planatons
moving million tons of megabombs
with captian planet and megatron...
you rap like an marvelComic from ComicCon
I can tell from your pic in your biopic
My genome, will change your top pick like Vietnam
I remember V at nam telling me to stay calm
While war waged on
Breakin you down at the crack of dawn
microscopic with Cycloptic biopic
optics with larger profits that pitch forks
At prophets
You still seeing what bra fits
Checking out Al's fits
Stop all that lying
Drop all your bad habytes
I play spades with mavericks
shaving points off the average
Your dumbass reading this
Like watching your own ass kick
I ball over your head
Tea bagging like I'm Mr. Fantastic
My sac look elastic
I stick and mnove like a hat trick
I’m a savage eatin my many enemies with cabbage.
You'r too weak its on the surface,
I picked you on purpose
Your last verse you forced it
It was the worse-it
Sounded rehearsed-it
Seemed so plastic
Killing you dead serpents
These short tails aint worth it
We charm pets and kill pests a side
And lets the vets decide
where the dead reside
all bets aside
You dark knights never bright
Your end in plain sight
Dead on arrival
Then streaming it on Spike
On late night, drinking sprite on Skype
This ain't even a fight
This aint right
Beating you over the head phones
Until I pick up a dead tone
All because you spit on my mic
You just a flinstone
Your chic an easy bone
Chewing through stone
Thirsty for the throne
you in the way
so you got over thrown
How's that for throne
I’m headstrong in a zone
my own-zone, changing the O-zone
Raising the bar until its all gone
my Pen dragging, the new rome
my golden showers leaving you two-toned
I got the mightiest touch
you too much injury prone
with whore moans that should be home Moe
No homo but your hoe moans
When my black snake moan
Her hormones make her moan
Some I'm home Moe
Dealing with her hormones.
Bi- the way she found photos
Passcode your mobile phone, you
In a Tie-bow, with a Bi-Guy, all tied
getting Dee-Boned,
Waving hi, with a smile,
duck-tapped looking into the phone
A selfy, but you weren’t alone,
dude was hung Like a home depot, you hanging off his pole
You looked in love, text read, "waiting for the sequel"
you aren’t a rapper, you stay acting like you are evil,
Deep inside you hide your pride
Working discreet on the side,
wanting no trouble, cause we are all equal and you
stunt double for the village people.



druidicheirophant
AVARIS DEMALO
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 27th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 194

ayo panters bitch ass cldnt sound phonier
aint a cult leader more hoarier
i came here thru stargates in ionia
confessions of a ancient sorcerer
im in dark crypts wit bats im a serpent worshipper
kill preists wit bats im a gnosis hoarder
your talkin alien and galactic shit
im a dark lord chief heir of demonic spits
viciious clans ruthless u try n offer up ur kids
but those we just slice with knives
the real motives behind this enterprise
is all ur friends wives
leave ur village burned and plundered
all the guys sundered
and the bitches cast under in the dungeon
where theres hundreds
wit red eyed rats demented giants and monster dragons
im above ground sippin wisky sellin coke in a tavern
got bad habbits try n stop the bad patterns
serpent cults in underground caverns
ur suspicion of my erudtion
im a vicious priest wit eerie visions
my nagas wit hoods n serpent musicians
entranced in cauldrons and tombs
these eerie enchanted tunes
imbued of gloom bring doom
im a chief dark lord heir from hell
in lower astral 4d where reptilians dwell
corrupters of worlds bygone timeliness where the old empires fell
heirs necromancers and besiegers
shadowy hobgoblin creatures
u good wit ur words but check my features
i haunt ur block wit heaters
and rusty cleavers
your pink im black and red
now ur dog wont be unfed
slice n dice wit my jagged edge
put in a gravyard pound u wit a sledge
shit u spit is like puddin
i dont be grudging but i aint budgin
boil u in a cauldron
u just a plain slick rick
who thinks hes quick where his finger clicks
i got endless agility
u enter a forum and theres a air of irritability
fuck.. panter? really?
like seriously
hope u hearin this g
cause im a old one starseed
ur filled with odds
im with vicious creeds
dark goths and star gods
listen to whats decreed
u a regular human im a ancient breed
come from the middle east with Medes
reptile aryan vicious priests
leave u oiled up n greased
engulfed in flames like fire breathin beasts
ur a creep thats hating
im a feastin dragon
ur eatin bacon
i got phantoms workin in tandem
this diabolical anthem
i got beat enemies u cant match them
i got beef wit dragons
u cant beat a farming creep with a wagon

SidheFeyMiledh

Panter896
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 34

I’m over here scratching my head
All that rapping and I didn’t feel a word you said
I killed you with skill in the real world your dead
If I step inside your demon world
Then its off with your head
My gremlins, spin web
That trap goblins, then send them
Home hobblin wobble-in
Never flyin again
My state meant, say when
I’m ready whenever,
l state pen a-tent-trees
That never bend
You a fire breathing dragen
Well pipe down my friend
I'm Pendragon, hotter than you could have ever been
You can't even phantem
my tales anthem
So fly, I die abolical
You pubic faloical
You keeping up with me isn't logical
I'm not a fan, cause I can't follow you
My boys in blue, beam you up,
insert a pool stick in your bot-tux
Now you up tight, and can't give a fuck
All stuck in a space ship, fucked up,
from talking shut, you can't take a shit
Shit got you tight, I can smell the shit
I’m in the booth, spitting truth
I got bad ways
Spitting hot flames in Voracious waves
Mess around and stunt your youth
My star ship enter prize
So big you mesmorized
Leave your stargates gazed
We aint on the same page
My D-mons grazed feast of the heads of
Serpents for days steel pipe for a cage
I feed’em with hunger and rage
We battle cats with battle axe
Run in tight get carried out relaxed
My cats fear-real
Fangs of steel
You better protect your neck
You deader than a door knob
On my buck-it list –so check
I could do this shyte for days
Ignore whatever he says
I’m better than you in 1,000 ways
And I get better with age
You just going through a phase
Like that prenatal stage
But this is real
A stage, so I wont take it light
You battlin a beast in the middle of the night
I’m thirsting for blood, looking for a fight
This is childs play,Jason mask
Off with the lights
Edward scissor your hands
Savor your wind pipes
rusty butter knife
ring around your neck
for the rest of your life
I tia-bow, you hang tight
You gaylords hella light
I snip u, mid flight, no sights
My bars get so much hype
The pressure breaks pipes
Leave way under hyped
It’s knot your fault
It’s your type
You drama tise, about imaginary guys
The truth arrive, you commercial lies
My goons, silverbacks with bionic eyes
Target your market then watch bombs fly
Dead man walking love killing theses guys
In the bag-dad with middle eastern ties
We enter your enterprise
Put a capt-in Kurk,
Pay cash-here then drive’in bye
You can watch him die slow
What, u didn’t know?
I’m real as fuck, my flow fucking you up
You looking bad, change the thread up
you got heemed up, it’s a wrap,
You can write, but compared to me, you can't rap


Panter896
Thought Provoker
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Joined 26th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 34

What’s up with this fool this a battle my dude
Your in my domain so you play by my rule
You battling a beast that’s more evil than you
Anything you do, I can do better than you
I’m bred from a breed that would eat you for their food
We watch and read about your type on the daily news
They only found your wind pipe no other parts of you
Thats what happened when you come across a beast,
That feeds off the hearts of its lower counter parts
Rap underworld boss, much bigger than you for starts
I make you and your crew look like they Scooby Doo
Me controlling the elements that's hell for you
nothing you can do, my metaphors got meaning
You are a hoax just teething,
Imma full blown demon
you barely steaming
you've bean bitten its good ridden
my odds against you for so many reasons
I been hot, who you think changed the seasons
My HANS solo helped the pharaohs off spring
Made Alienware out of theses underground kings
Beating my chest in the middle of the ring
Raising vikings train'em to win
With my pen alone I could kill you with writtin
Imagine what a battle axe would do to your chin
I'll hulk smash, push your shin bone through your chin
Fresh off of my second wind, fresh off of a wind
I been doing this, before you exist,
And will run this when you stop breathing
You are in the path of a psychopath
You do the math then face my wrath
I kill guys blood ties then take a bath and laugh
You should just stop
We are not even
I revive your life
Kill you twice
Just so the plot thicken
You was easy pick, from slim Pickens
I swallow whole chickens and baby pigeons
Livin under bridges trying to change my image
Fightin trolls and warriors my daily scrimmage
killing you, then train your brethren and break bread with
Your best friend, I'll be home by seven to have some words with the reverent
My crazy flow I’ll spit you a Rembrandt
My skill running rampant
About to get a little uncanned
I got a bitch in the Hampton
And she thinks I’m top ten
Plus I’m tall dark and I’m handsome
I’ll take you for ransom
But your not worth a grand-son
You couldn’t out rap me
If you were Santa grandson
Your evil family
Will Die ironically
every villain dies gory
In every story featuring me




druidicheirophant
AVARIS DEMALO
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 27th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 194

your afflicted
could tell by just what your lips spit
piles and piles of dim witts
niga needed two disses
im a evil vampiric hostess
i could tell ur biting off my galactic gnosis
just words and no close fists leave u under hypnosis
i breath fire with dragons
and your toasted
hands clapping hundred rows of fists
in pure bliss your attacks amiss im boastless
i can tell my clubs leave dents
your two two cents almost make sense
i got ruins of snake demons and serpents
that watch you from the astal plane on earths surface
u tread paths and wander soulless completely hopeless
funny cuz yur hole fam knows this
you live with no purpose
im a demon king from mesopotamia
your on a tiny boat full of a ocean of pirates shit couldnt get shakier
your a priest with christians
im in evil cults that worship beasts with dark visions
this a mismatch is obvious if our wits clash youl be in composites
and i could give two shits of your nonsense spits
thought i heard a baby cry
clump mad shit together and call it stir fry
told u moms u won the battle yeah dont lie
we bigs boys on the block niga she tellin u to stay inside
got boundaries for youngings suggest you abide
im a dark serpent cultist
nefarious whispers and giggles from the abyss
your pointless
and your dim rap templates seem endless
ill beat you sightless leave you disoriented senseless
im in crews of negative creeps
im a warlock your locked and you need keys
you with fagget zionist jews
im with nephilim black magician hebrews  
i am mystically gifted did dope shit
and wrote ill scripts
before you ever existed
im from the old universes empires
you kneel down before my lesser sires
im in a heirarchy of dragon beasts and heirs
in misty swamps and hellish zones where its frigid and cold
took me one swing and you was k o ' d you act bold
in this ode it is told that your souls already sold
soon youl be crows food your casted down so low
your trying to test and older god
you and your rhymes are full of holes cause your shot
im the king of battle rap you both spit and shit crap
im with master creators that seed worlds
your eating cotton candy swirls with little girls
im with hordes of dark lords heir of the renegades cheif of phantoms
after one lap your sore panters sucks and cant catch up i easily lapped him
leave you hypnotized and mind controlled
im a adept at dark arts and my hearts black and cold
this is funny shit you did a double diss
thinks his attacks hit i dodged
and now im double pissed my dark serpents
dont like those with no purpose
and hiss
i got blades and i blend in with dark shades
with a kris
your in the light with your kids im in the midnight twilight
and youl be in a chasm with evil phantoms in a black rift
im in underground  with portals connected to your basement
sending in smoke bombs along with defaced kids
and play barney music to make your head spin
than send in dragon devilkin
that will make you tremble like evil jinn
sorry to your pipe dreams
with your light decrees
we light trees
and hang with dark lords that help me write these
sorry g but im too beast
you dont know who behind this screen
or whats hovering around me spitting shit thats obscene
you a pipsquek fiend that will neva seen green
and i aint even being mean
im playing nice up against your bitch made writes you even had to post twice

sstruhar
AFleetingMemory
Lost Thinker
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Forum Posts: 21

so you think you can throw a few words down
jumping around, acting a clown, the baddest rapper in town.
will you stand your ground, when i'm snatching that crown
and your homies will frown, when my sounds renown
now, i have to admit, i sit and read a bit
some of it's fly, but most of it's shit
regurgitating spit, you refit as wit
omit the unfit, or rather just quit...

Now, i bet you're wondering who the fucks this guy
i'm the king toke smoker flying high in the sky
i'm the dry eye blazer, that you can't deny
and i rely on a reply, because i know you'll try

now it takes a bit more then a beat and a rhyme
you have to put in the time, to grind that climb
or the only green you'll ever see is nickles and dimes
now you want to see the cash flow, get that dough
take it slow, read what you write, know what you throw
you'll never grow, treading through snow
or you'll be that guy we knew ages ago

so bring it to me hard, because you got one shot
pass me a plate of snot, and i'm out this spot
in case you forgot, i'm not like the lot
i don't wither and rot, i got a sinister plot

you may think you're cool, but i read your jewel
it's just a pool of drool...
you may think i'm cruel, but you started this dual
if you don't have the tool, to stand to my rule
step up to my height or go back to school
remember me, for today, i took on two fool...

~drops the mic~

Panter896
Thought Provoker
Jamaica 1awards
Joined 26th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 34

Well look at thee
this little bumble bee
wants to rumble with me
I'll treatin this little prick
like Hercules flicking a flee
off a balcony, with an apostrophe
you facing me
a lyrical catastrophe
to humanity
try and riot me
I wouldn't try it B
my antivirus alchemy
extremely violent
deadly not silent
wiping out ur society
cause these he-she species
trying to fuck with me
You two ain't ready for me
My micro-chemistry
I've mastered all three
im T minus Three
You 2 couldn't handle me
If i was tapestry  
You need surgery
to be as sharp as me
bringing amity to your whole family tree
I'm focused on these two guys
like the Capital I in king
I am I like I and I
You battling a Jedi
With more mind tricks
Than netflix
in the back of your mind-relax
it takes time
to spit rythmes as dopish as mine
get to the end of the line
cause you falling behind
Sick of playing with these feather weights
i rather wait, for another date
your rythmes sedate
cause they don't hold much weight
i bend bars into metal plates
you weirdos phony
get off your horse and pony
come at me homey
and get your ass set
I'm an asset
to these prospects
I've trained war vets
your crew-kets
i drop bombs
all over your tiny steps
you aint ready yet
you idiot and ass beating
is what you get
i go violent, then beast out
titantium teeth out
reach out
ripping your Adams apple
and your eyes out
then its peace out
you can't fuck with me
i'm strong as shit
i can throw a rock
and hit a rocketship
i'm the greatest of'em all
my rap bars
ali akh bars
like shock bars
ya'll bars sub par
like an armoire
I'll skin you raw
and wear your fur
for my amour, brah!
You lying kings, getting kinged
by a lion king, thats striking
fast like lightening
its frightening
I'll rip and roar
razor sharp teeth bitting
through these titans
I'll kill'em all
and eat'em raw
dislocate my jaw
and eat'em all



Panter896
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Forum Posts: 34

Waiting for your reply,
Holding my breath, I might die,
These guys, against me,
It's like Godzilla fighting Barney
this is fine with me, makes for good rhythms,
Besides, I like the ending of these stories.
It ends in gore, but I'll be sure of glory.
You flow corny and you bore me.
I’ll hulk stomp ya
Til I get a sponsa from Monsta
A mac truck compared to you Tonkas
Wangsta gangstas with telaprompta stanzas
A lot of questions with no answers
Showing more ass than exotic dancers
Headed for the top, no chancers
I’m different than these species
A bunch of beneath mes,
Just a pile of feces
Giving me the creepies,
Ugly sleeping beauties, soon as they catch me
They release me cause I go beasty, and my wolverines
Run schemes like marines, turn beef to Lean cuisine,
We won’t sign no treaty, so eat your wheaties
my whole team ready to die, they try angle schemes
In the red light disc trick, by any means they fiens
Toe tagging your regime put them
In the back, of an all black limousine
stacked, stuffed full like a fien
I’m captain jack with the beam
Capping jack and his team
I’ll treat this dim Witt like a bisquick dip sticks
And flip shit wit linguistics that’s magnificent
Whoop your behind, with my Two cents in the nic of time.
The skeletons in my closet, stepped out of line,
Now they spirituality inclined, you couldn’t understand
My up rise so you under mind , I’ll make terror rise
In your beady eyes
I terrorize these geeky guys with Hands Solo at my side
Manhandling attacks from opposing sides
An enemy of mine killing enemies of mine
Doesn’t make them friends of any kind
I kill em all one at a time
I’m like Thoas in Optimus prime
Strong arming these lord of rings
I’m the king of kings
Dismantle the mantle if it means the dynasty lives
My bloodline survived by my queens
Flows so potent they rip you open
Holden your throat cause they got you choken
This black token, beating this fake Tolken
Mind control over this foe, like I’m a Volken
A day walker, that’s omnipotent
It hurt your feels don’t-it

Panter896
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Forum Posts: 34

I haven't gotten the win yet
How soon we four get
The sooner we forget, the better we get
I beat this vet
trying to treat a beast like a pet
I bet you are upset
I send my regards and my regrets
At my own request
I getting ready to get set
I'm going in like super sets
And you know how the going gets
King of this mountain
With a ton of trinkets
defending the title
With these threats
Any form of disrespect
I intersect, with prospects
That affects the intellects
of infantile idiots.
Cutting you off
And keeping you off
Like fat weight lost
You Microsoft
You a high risk, cancer case, with metal plates
In your face your basis outta place
The facts you gotta face
New kid on the block
We are changing place
you loosing face
Trying to keep pace with the human race
While sharing apartment space with your friend Pace
And his girlfriend Grace, who you met on MySpace
At your friends place, like changing place
On your ex box market place, you lil snake.
you battling me, face to face with an ape,
No escape, grab your face, crush your head like grape
Your body bones, thrown in the lake,
Life is great, that's why I am wearing my cape



Sonnytone
Strange Creature
Joined 3rd Sep 2017
Forum Posts: 1

You live that life? Or, is that your life? When you going thru it..Are you critiquing or living?  Or does talk of the struggle mean  you've finished living the sentence?

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