Poetry competition CLOSED 24th May 2014 5:21am
WINNER
Krosgood (Violence)
Krosgood (Violence)
RUNNERS-UP:
3ampoems
and MadameLavender
Haikus of Hell
Gangbanging Evil
Anointed cherub
Tried to get gangster with God
A war in heaven
Reppin’ his cause, krumped
Lucifer and his homies
Torn a new ass-hole
Kicked out of heaven
Fallen angels, earth demons
From riches to rags
Bandana dressed horns
Winged weapons, and Nike hooves
Ski mask disguises
Mind-jacked; thief of thoughts
Stealing souls on the down-low
Sodomizing faith
Gang-raping hope’s throat
Pistol-whipping, belief
Demonic spirits
~Rain~
Anointed cherub
Tried to get gangster with God
A war in heaven
Reppin’ his cause, krumped
Lucifer and his homies
Torn a new ass-hole
Kicked out of heaven
Fallen angels, earth demons
From riches to rags
Bandana dressed horns
Winged weapons, and Nike hooves
Ski mask disguises
Mind-jacked; thief of thoughts
Stealing souls on the down-low
Sodomizing faith
Gang-raping hope’s throat
Pistol-whipping, belief
Demonic spirits
~Rain~
Demons Paradise
Demons paradise
Vast lands of doomed human souls
Sounds of painful screams
Demons feed on souls
Fangs dig into sinned mortals
And paints blood stained walls
Red, colour of love
Consumes the burning abyss
Satan has returned
Silence throughout hell.
Of beasts and demons alike
Heads bow for the King
Music to his ears
He sips bubbling blood champagne
of God's loved angels'
Upon thrones of bones
He leads corrupted mortals
To Eternal Pain
Demons paradise
Vast lands of doomed human souls
Sounds of painful screams
Demons feed on souls
Fangs dig into sinned mortals
And paints blood stained walls
Red, colour of love
Consumes the burning abyss
Satan has returned
Silence throughout hell.
Of beasts and demons alike
Heads bow for the King
Music to his ears
He sips bubbling blood champagne
of God's loved angels'
Upon thrones of bones
He leads corrupted mortals
To Eternal Pain
Through the forest
Toward the deep dead cave
Decent begins
Memories fresh
This new realm all I know
This agony norm
Night and day
near point of zero visiblty
Screaming souls
There's whispers
The you that was ignored
Burns you now
My testimony
Wake in black water
Cold and still
Merky reflection
Show my damnation,water
Slowly bubbling
Toward the deep dead cave
Decent begins
Memories fresh
This new realm all I know
This agony norm
Night and day
near point of zero visiblty
Screaming souls
There's whispers
The you that was ignored
Burns you now
My testimony
Wake in black water
Cold and still
Merky reflection
Show my damnation,water
Slowly bubbling
Among devils and mad
What I am doing
Here among devils and mad
Why punish me now?
I'm just an angel
During all my pure long life
Inside the City
Never kill a man
Nor abused of a woman
Nor shaked a kid
Just play with money
Of other guys and lost it
In a tenth seconds
Only five billions
Of dollars from poor people
Also from my bank
You think I must be
In hell because of this game?
And I deserve hell?
while all were great I still counted the syllables for the standard 5-7-5 format for Haikus. Some of the others were excellent but strayed from the path. But there is a possibility I miscounted and if I did just point it out and I'll happily slap myself in the head like an idiots. Regardless, well played everyone
Anonymous
Well it couldn't have been me. . .I cheated and used a syllabus counter, sad to admit. I hate to count.
Congrats, VIOLENCE!
High 5 Celine and Madame Lavender:)
Congrats, VIOLENCE!
High 5 Celine and Madame Lavender:)
