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Haikus of Hell

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest

Let's twist things up a bit
write me a six part haiku on demons, hell, or the big red man himself (not Santa Claus).

ONE ENTRY PER POET

TWO WEEKS

LET THE SUFFERING BE LEGENDARY

...EVEN IN HELL


gardenlover
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By six parts
Do you mean six lines ie 2 normal length haikus or do you mean s normal length haikus?

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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6 normal length haikus. Sorry bout the confusion

gardenlover
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It is hot down here
With so many people
What are we to do

What are we to do
How can we absolve our sins
Must we sit and burn

Must we sit and burn
Did my sins justify this
There seems no escape

There seems no escape
Can't beat them so let's join them
Can we see the boss

Can we see the boss
Old Nick can we  assist you
Cut wood stoke the fire

Cut wood stoke the fire
A job for life and for death
It is hot down here

HadesRising
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Thanks for kicking it off

poet Anonymous

THE SOLAR ANGEL

From the branches
Grows the twelve folded leaf
Journey of the Solar Angel

Vaporizing thoughts
Cling to paragraph lines
Vocalizing initiations

The serpent`s egg glows of depth
From it`s eyes, I seek
The staff of Hermes

My soles upon the soil
Healed, by the washing waters
Sighing, I am sightless, blind

To the credo of echoing stars
Traveling, in tenfold sensation
Arrived at the end

Thus begins the invocation
Fire for the flakes
Lucifer awakes....



Its not haikus but its based on a poem I recently wrote
My inspiration for this poem is
"A treatise on White Magic" By Alice A. Bailey
Ive changed the end (last stanza)into something related to Dark magic

MadameLavender
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HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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awesome ML

Satyr
Twisted Dreamer
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i will return later for this one

exe
Lost Thinker
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f.
skinhusk men
follow the dead women's scent
elusive


u.
asbestos
she breathes with her eyes and ears
(she still died)


þ.
tradition
demands she wake at moondawn
sleep never


a.
handheld knives
she is not very trusting.
do not trust.


r.
she is hell
and you are in her now
cockburnt son


k.
heed hearsay
next time; now find a thing to
sacrifice

3ampoems
Celine Belli
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i don't think my poem is eligible because it's a different take on Hell... no demons, no satan or lucifer... but i'll post it anyway!

we do not choose life
and there is no wonder why
the strong newborns cry

past life Karma reigns
over the choices you make
in your present state

there is no purpose
if we back-track constantly
no purpose at all

Hell does not greet death
it feeds on your darkest fears
while you are alive

Hell’s reality
it is shaped from what you do
it resides in you

Hell is not a place
Hell is a collective of
what you will die for

poet Anonymous

death dealer demon

child born a hostage
the death dealer demon counts
its days, dark tunnel awaits

traipse unrighteous path
days weeks months roll into years,
dark end tunnel lights

severed maggot skins
brethren him into the realm
that hears no evil

but surrenders to
abolish pure codex stained
holy by design

we have blessed St.
Lucifer, brought St. Michael
to his unsaint knees

and bore him serpents
from demon-goddess-bitches;
a child born hostage

EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
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WOULD KILL FOR TASTE OF SULFUR

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-163srolcIDI/Ul18XBmbTlI/AAAAAAAAPpo/cBzTjzUyrsk/s1600/The-lake-of-Fire-Hell-Horrific-Hell-Explained-Revealed-Exposed-Torment-Reason-for-Hell-Atheism-Atheists-Unbelievers-Damnation-Damned-Souls-Why-Does-It-Exist-Evil-Darkness-Judgment-Nature-Realm-Dimension.jpg

Lucifer awakes
Rising up with fiery eyes
His kingdom reborn

The devils rejoice
Dancing with the raging fires
Licking Lucifer

Dante’s inferno
May pale in comparison
Feast to the blind eyes

Blazing inferno
Tortured souls writhing in pain
From flesh, scalding

Scalding flesh hangs
From skeletal remains
The taste of sulfur

Suffocating smell
Fills the air in which they dwell
Some people would kill...

poet Anonymous

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Krosgood
Violence
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Suicidal Reasoning

Endless rows of brick
Screams echoing down the halls
Laughter from the throne

Pain is exquisite
Asking it for more lashes
Just to feel something

living once again
When the flesh begins to weep
Addicted to hurt

Calling for more blood
Torture killing the numbness
Puddles at the feet

Skin is leather bound
Scars covering every inch
More force is applied

Masochist grinning
Suicide was the gateway
To an endless pain







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