bleed your worth to me
Madintellect
Mike stew
Forum Posts: 232
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 29th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 232
My Worth. By: Mike Stewart
I'm priceless,
unlimited righteous
Driven to fight this
Giving up spite cause
My potential is infinite
In more ways than one
Look at my problems, like the way I look at the sun
I do it even though it hurts my eyes to see
You are worth exactly the same as is me
Blood sweat & tears
Nothing is as it appears
Some say I have wasted years
I say I enjoyed the beers
I write until I bleed
With-
Fight and will 2 lead
Words could die
Due to loss of blood
They often cry
Thinking they're-
Just a dud
I roll with proper thinking
But the fake'ness isn't taking
As long as it should (to go away)
I Know a way
To flow and say
That poetry
Has been knowing me
4 some time
Blood rhyme
Spark a scud? Fine
8th of the day
Weight that display
Whether or not I really feel ok
words will die without a donor
My words pulse more blood than a boner
Drips and dances in the moon light
Sweetheart come here; cacoon
Pt 4
Lol.....
Here we go again, the voices are watching:)
Insanity is really something worth catching
no matching
the feeling
of
reveiling
no ceiling .. in retarded.
sarcasm is how I start it.
Interview went excellant
work galore is evident
new van & phone, all that shit
but once month off?
is what I call a bit...
...of a tease
Posting thoughts
hosting lots
of great ideas
(on how to spot, the way I see us)
needing to change
practice words-
that seeem strange
but in the mid range
I care about me.
this is therapy
I share with the
unbearable... stupid & ignorant common joe
who really outta know
this world is a for show
and all you know..
has been on a pre-concieved basis
where you memorize, then mood in which-
you percieve spaces
around you.
and its activities
phycolical examination
in this oasis
hasnt the faces
to read between-
the spaces
to question
what faces
the average paces
off day to day life.
Irrashon emotion is the name of the game
Entertainment is distraction, so it all is the same.
stupid to blame others for the cause of your pain.
ignorant angry people say its all in my brain
when I simply lookin out so we all dont get slain.(10 20 years down the road)
it looks like the damn jet plane explodes.. when its blasting the shit off the pacific ocean
edit later, elevater...
Gotta think of the kids
eat a dink, you are sqids
without a beat
cant think
plant sink
in the garden
rain soon will be startin
fuck thinkin about paul martin
lol
Number four
has won the war
& placed its-
order for...
humor!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fuck you and your sence of humor
I get 700 on my iq test after I blast a hoover
cannon in the parking lot
man who is still hard on thought
straight a'z bitch was all I got
growing up.
not as fine as you might think
responiblities before fun
or you might sink
its cool when you act like a slight dink?
Head butts in more way than one, I just might think..
the remedy
metephoric symphony
Historical Interest we
have sent to the.....
cognitive thought
is anaylized but forgot
are you surprized-
what you got?
The spiritual accention
driven within intention
feels great its like an engine
that can spin
perpetual
& it can-
still affect u all
if your mind was in intergral
with harmonic skill
product of the hypnotic thrill
knowledge is my erotic pill
its funny hey
A rare breed
(if there were more like me)
then we could scare greed
and take a prepared lead
for now
bwah ahahaha I look crazy :p
if you are scared. heed
Rhymes are grown
just like a rare seed
poetry
that cares; Bleed
its actually
sad as hell
people will laugh until
the third world
has a real..
tone to it
how would you survive with no phone? screw it!
your not understanding,the power of what your using?
Ive spent thousands of hours research the past. a bit confusing
I took law, and criminology and its all of us loosing
reversing legislation is so easy. abusing....
I often forget I use words you probably dont know.
and theres always a spelling mistake or two, that I show.
and you've been programmed to laugh it up and judge that it show
absoulutely any truth to the matter of...
fuck it.
I'm just a man in electrical
not thinking un rashonal
stuck with a passion
Ok I want to leave it straight
I have the right to hate
you for being a sheep
Follow me!!!!!!!!
or fuck off
By: MIkeStewart2014
ms:)>2014&beyond
I
Pt 4
Lol.....
Here we go again, the voices are watching:)
Insanity is really something worth catching
no matching
the feeling
of
reveiling
no ceiling .. in retarded.
sarcasm is how I start it.
Interview went excellant
work galore is evident
new van & phone, all that shit
but once month off?
is what I call a bit...
...of a tease
Posting thoughts
hosting lots
of great ideas
(on how to spot, the way I see us)
needing to change
practice words-
that seeem strange
but in the mid range
I care about me.
this is therapy
I share with the
unbearable... stupid & ignorant common joe
who really outta know
this world is a for show
and all you know..
has been on a pre-concieved basis
I
I'm priceless,
unlimited righteous
Driven to fight this
Giving up spite cause
My potential is infinite
In more ways than one
Look at my problems, like the way I look at the sun
I do it even though it hurts my eyes to see
You are worth exactly the same as is me
Blood sweat & tears
Nothing is as it appears
Some say I have wasted years
I say I enjoyed the beers
I write until I bleed
With-
Fight and will 2 lead
Words could die
Due to loss of blood
They often cry
Thinking they're-
Just a dud
I roll with proper thinking
But the fake'ness isn't taking
As long as it should (to go away)
I Know a way
To flow and say
That poetry
Has been knowing me
4 some time
Blood rhyme
Spark a scud? Fine
8th of the day
Weight that display
Whether or not I really feel ok
words will die without a donor
My words pulse more blood than a boner
Drips and dances in the moon light
Sweetheart come here; cacoon
Pt 4
Lol.....
Here we go again, the voices are watching:)
Insanity is really something worth catching
no matching
the feeling
of
reveiling
no ceiling .. in retarded.
sarcasm is how I start it.
Interview went excellant
work galore is evident
new van & phone, all that shit
but once month off?
is what I call a bit...
...of a tease
Posting thoughts
hosting lots
of great ideas
(on how to spot, the way I see us)
needing to change
practice words-
that seeem strange
but in the mid range
I care about me.
this is therapy
I share with the
unbearable... stupid & ignorant common joe
who really outta know
this world is a for show
and all you know..
has been on a pre-concieved basis
where you memorize, then mood in which-
you percieve spaces
around you.
and its activities
phycolical examination
in this oasis
hasnt the faces
to read between-
the spaces
to question
what faces
the average paces
off day to day life.
Irrashon emotion is the name of the game
Entertainment is distraction, so it all is the same.
stupid to blame others for the cause of your pain.
ignorant angry people say its all in my brain
when I simply lookin out so we all dont get slain.(10 20 years down the road)
it looks like the damn jet plane explodes.. when its blasting the shit off the pacific ocean
edit later, elevater...
Gotta think of the kids
eat a dink, you are sqids
without a beat
cant think
plant sink
in the garden
rain soon will be startin
fuck thinkin about paul martin
lol
Number four
has won the war
& placed its-
order for...
humor!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fuck you and your sence of humor
I get 700 on my iq test after I blast a hoover
cannon in the parking lot
man who is still hard on thought
straight a'z bitch was all I got
growing up.
not as fine as you might think
responiblities before fun
or you might sink
its cool when you act like a slight dink?
Head butts in more way than one, I just might think..
the remedy
metephoric symphony
Historical Interest we
have sent to the.....
cognitive thought
is anaylized but forgot
are you surprized-
what you got?
The spiritual accention
driven within intention
feels great its like an engine
that can spin
perpetual
& it can-
still affect u all
if your mind was in intergral
with harmonic skill
product of the hypnotic thrill
knowledge is my erotic pill
its funny hey
A rare breed
(if there were more like me)
then we could scare greed
and take a prepared lead
for now
bwah ahahaha I look crazy :p
if you are scared. heed
Rhymes are grown
just like a rare seed
poetry
that cares; Bleed
its actually
sad as hell
people will laugh until
the third world
has a real..
tone to it
how would you survive with no phone? screw it!
your not understanding,the power of what your using?
Ive spent thousands of hours research the past. a bit confusing
I took law, and criminology and its all of us loosing
reversing legislation is so easy. abusing....
I often forget I use words you probably dont know.
and theres always a spelling mistake or two, that I show.
and you've been programmed to laugh it up and judge that it show
absoulutely any truth to the matter of...
fuck it.
I'm just a man in electrical
not thinking un rashonal
stuck with a passion
Ok I want to leave it straight
I have the right to hate
you for being a sheep
Follow me!!!!!!!!
or fuck off
By: MIkeStewart2014
ms:)>2014&beyond
I
Pt 4
Lol.....
Here we go again, the voices are watching:)
Insanity is really something worth catching
no matching
the feeling
of
reveiling
no ceiling .. in retarded.
sarcasm is how I start it.
Interview went excellant
work galore is evident
new van & phone, all that shit
but once month off?
is what I call a bit...
...of a tease
Posting thoughts
hosting lots
of great ideas
(on how to spot, the way I see us)
needing to change
practice words-
that seeem strange
but in the mid range
I care about me.
this is therapy
I share with the
unbearable... stupid & ignorant common joe
who really outta know
this world is a for show
and all you know..
has been on a pre-concieved basis
I
blue_angel
Forum Posts: 173
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 15th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 173
Thank you, Mike for sharing your epic, passionate, hyper-rhyming stream of thought. I appreciate the insightful vision. :)
Anonymous
Deadbeat
The beggars preyed upon walls
in triplicate anomalies
watching you breathe
from safe distances
carved into pulses
of earthen eyes
they beckoned imperfections,
siphoning malevolent pacts
from your shallow marrow;
and though I swore
that in the green light
your lips frayed to rags
the bass of your ego
drum-fired the silence
when iniquitous rains fell
in ignorant measures,
darting the millpond
that once was stilled.
The beggars preyed upon walls
in triplicate anomalies
watching you breathe
from safe distances
carved into pulses
of earthen eyes
they beckoned imperfections,
siphoning malevolent pacts
from your shallow marrow;
and though I swore
that in the green light
your lips frayed to rags
the bass of your ego
drum-fired the silence
when iniquitous rains fell
in ignorant measures,
darting the millpond
that once was stilled.
Awakenedsoul
Forum Posts: 41
Fire of Insight
9
Joined 26th Nov 2013Forum Posts: 41
Poetry's Window
Unlimited boundaries
Paths never imagined or taken
No mental boundaries of society’s beliefs
A world of thoughts collected
Stacked neatly into one little place
Poetry is freedom of the mind
Beyond conventional thinking
It speaks to the soul directly
Language only few can understand
Escaping the world poetically
Example of such wonders
Of a mind no longer chained
Consider our universe with new perspective
That we are just a microscopic cell
How is that for introspective
Poetry is escaping
Escaping reality
Into the window of our souls
Finally living
Unlimited boundaries
Paths never imagined or taken
No mental boundaries of society’s beliefs
A world of thoughts collected
Stacked neatly into one little place
Poetry is freedom of the mind
Beyond conventional thinking
It speaks to the soul directly
Language only few can understand
Escaping the world poetically
Example of such wonders
Of a mind no longer chained
Consider our universe with new perspective
That we are just a microscopic cell
How is that for introspective
Poetry is escaping
Escaping reality
Into the window of our souls
Finally living
Anonymous
Flirting with the Truth
in an unkempt bed
amidst restless blankets;
when shadows subtly transcend
to errant darkness
---------is when i begin
flirting with the truth
sorting and cataloging
(gullibility from jealousy)
the intertwining emotions
(stubborn independence from vanity)
from this butterfly-infested bezoar
(happiness from fantasy)
in my guts-
that dare to choke
the words from my heart
too clever to be guilty
too naive to walk away
my self-shaming gaze
slithers down,
to a childhood token
as it's stuffing shifts
disapprovingly
in an unkempt bed
amidst restless blankets;
when shadows subtly transcend
to errant darkness
---------is when i begin
flirting with the truth
sorting and cataloging
(gullibility from jealousy)
the intertwining emotions
(stubborn independence from vanity)
from this butterfly-infested bezoar
(happiness from fantasy)
in my guts-
that dare to choke
the words from my heart
too clever to be guilty
too naive to walk away
my self-shaming gaze
slithers down,
to a childhood token
as it's stuffing shifts
disapprovingly
blue_angel
Forum Posts: 173
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 15th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 173
Wow, Missy, AwakenedSoul and Indigo!! These three poems are striking each to their own individual depth. Thank you, tremendously for sharing them. This will, indeed to be a tough decision to come. *Powerful Poetry*
HenryDuthler
Joined 9th May 2014
Forum Posts: 1
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 1
By Henry Duthler
The slip of the tip of the tongue
Words let loose, unleashed and free
Silence breaks, and takes its place
Within the pin prick of uncertainty
As whispers weave without regard
Venomous teeth seep through my skin
What a tangled mess, an ounce of flesh
The devil's in the details that lie within.
J_Alex
Forum Posts: 59
Lost Thinker
3
Joined 13th Jan 2014Forum Posts: 59
-It's Just Begun-
And all that Thicked and Thinned
Was but dust in the wind
Return to Dust
Return to Wind
Return to Earth
Return to Home
Return to warmth of mother's womb
Return
Return
Beyond the Womb
Return to me
Return
Return
And all that Thicked and Thinned
Was but dust in the wind
Return to Dust
Return to Wind
Return to Earth
Return to Home
Return to warmth of mother's womb
Return
Return
Beyond the Womb
Return to me
Return
Return
blue_angel
Forum Posts: 173
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 15th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 173
Thank you, Henry and J_ ,,, two fierce writes. Henry thy tongue weaves lines of sweet poison, and J_Alex Returning within and into the descent is an alluring treat.
Thank you deeply to, EVERYONE that has submitted their poetic art to this comp. so far. I'm truly moved by each one in a very unique way. This is NOT going to be easy. They are all magnificent. :P
Thank you deeply to, EVERYONE that has submitted their poetic art to this comp. so far. I'm truly moved by each one in a very unique way. This is NOT going to be easy. They are all magnificent. :P
xmar82
Forum Posts: 153
Dangerous Mind
13
Joined 10th Oct 2013 Forum Posts: 153
Symbiosis
It whispers in my mind
Unfamiliar yet inviting somehow
Touching something within
I am entranced in the allure
New perspectives are brought to light
Exciting, unique views of the world
Insights to the unseen
The affects are immediate
Attraction turns to need
Need turns to obsession
The change takes hold and
The inner voice becomes
One with me
It whispers in my mind
Unfamiliar yet inviting somehow
Touching something within
I am entranced in the allure
New perspectives are brought to light
Exciting, unique views of the world
Insights to the unseen
The affects are immediate
Attraction turns to need
Need turns to obsession
The change takes hold and
The inner voice becomes
One with me
blue_angel
Forum Posts: 173
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 15th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 173
Thank you deeply, xmar82 for your hypnotic whispers from within. I appreciate the intrigue. :)
blue_angel
Forum Posts: 173
Fire of Insight
10
Joined 15th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 173
This is truly a difficult task to choose only 'one' winner. Every piece is crafted thoughtfully through insightful seduction, allure, flowing uniqueness, piercing imagery, dark elegance, deep suffering and epic wisdom. These together rises the passionate, poetic fires to their highest pinnacle. I'm pleased to be surrounded by such talent. I bow deeply in gratitude to you all. My rules narrow it slightly.
1st place: Miss G.(Ghoulie) with her crafty 'Deconstruct & Recreate'
runners - up: A painstaking decision this is.
Indigo - 'Flirting with the Truth'
(and yes sorry guys and gals tie for 3rd between)
AwakenedSoul - Poetry's Window & Miss_Sub's- Deadbeat.
Following tightly the rest. Stunning pieces from everyone. Again, Thank you all :P
1st place: Miss G.(Ghoulie) with her crafty 'Deconstruct & Recreate'
runners - up: A painstaking decision this is.
Indigo - 'Flirting with the Truth'
(and yes sorry guys and gals tie for 3rd between)
AwakenedSoul - Poetry's Window & Miss_Sub's- Deadbeat.
Following tightly the rest. Stunning pieces from everyone. Again, Thank you all :P
johnrot
Forum Posts: 3645
Tyrant of Words
21
Joined 10th Oct 2012Forum Posts: 3645
yeah G!!!!!! rock on lady!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
Thank you so much for the runner-up spot, Blue!
Congratulations G!
Congratulations G!